"I have experienced paranormal activities" suddenly he added in the conversation that made all of us curious and gained our attention.
It was a cold night, we were sitting on chairs around the fire to heat up ourselves. We were 4 and everyone was sharing his life experiences with others. We were also drinking coffee while talking, everyone of us had a muffler around the neck to protect throat sore because of cold weather.
I saw my uncle who died 2 years ago. What? we all were almost shouted?
"Its impossible once a person leaves this world we can't see him," I said.
"You may have seen someone who has great resemblance to your uncle", another friend added.
"Guys cool down! let me explain", he said.
You all know I sell electronic equipment in my shop; once a man wearing a cap came to my shop and asked for some sort of LED lights. I looked at his face that made me shocked the man exactly looks like my uncle. I asked him "Whats your name?" he said, leave my name and provide what I have asked.
The sound of the wind was making his story more interesting. We all were listening with full concentration.
I said you look like "Hashim" that is my uncle name. He continued his story.
He replied I am asking last time if you will keep asking my name I will leave your shop and go to another.
The rejection of telling name was making me more curious. I tried to hold his forearm, he quickly got his arm from my grip with force and ran away. I also ran before him but as soon I came out of the shop, I couldn't see anyone running outside.
That's all, from that day onward I didn't see him again. I wish I can see him again. He finished the story.
Let me know in the comment section how is my attempt and tips on how can I make my writing better.
The title alone was enough to draw me in! Thank you for writing this!
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