Commentsbruce-pendragon (50)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: Bayani Part 2It's a great preview, and you've got me interested in what the story actually develops into. The one thing that was a little off was this sentence. As soon as the celebrations were over, he’d…bruce-pendragon (50)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: (WIP) The Aethya's End - Forgotten Prophecy - Chapter Two.The Celtic accent was a bit jarring in print, but I guess that's unavoidable. I also think the red-haired witch's plea for mercy was a little bit... well, "cookie-cutter," but other than that moment…bruce-pendragon (50)in nsfw • 5 years agonsfw Reveal this post or create an account to save your preferences.bruce-pendragon (50)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: The Prince's Pet: Prologue - The King's HerdsmenThanks for your feedback, and sorry for the delayed reply. Yeah, Lucia's an important character. She's actually the character whom the title refers to.bruce-pendragon (50)in china • 5 years agoRE: It's a Morbid Thought, But This Coronavirus Presents an Opportunity to Crush China Once and for All...Okay, wow. All I'm going to say is "remind me never to piss you off." It would work, but damn , this is cold.bruce-pendragon (50)in coronavirus • 5 years agoRE: Who the Hell Are These People? China's "Leading Committee on Novel Coronavirus Prevention and Control."Considering that China is... well, China, I'm not surprised. Love the effort you went through to put faces and a little of a back story on each of these villains though. It looks like if this…
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