Commentscamnine (34)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: Almost Real Emotions (An Original short story) Part 3 of 3Yes, I read the entire story, all three segments. And I was still surprised and enjoyed that very much. That said, of course I am interested to catch up with you and your work- but can we continue…camnine (34)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: Almost Real Emotions (An Original short story) Part 3 of 3Very interesting and well-written story. Took me a while to realize the vacation was a virtual one- I like that initial "not knowing." (BTW: I wonder if you remember me? Either way: very happy to…camnine (34)in hive-170798 • 5 years agoRE: seasons (a poem)dear owasco... thank you so much for your very kind words. to answer your question of who i am, at this point i can say only that i am new to actually posting on Steemit and slowly easing my toe…camnine (34)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Reading Charles Bukovski's story ( THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN IN TOWN)mgaft1... Did he really like Cass for her "personality?" What he says, to me, basically shakes out to Cass' "personality" being some sort of mental situation- from what he says, probably…camnine (34)in story • 8 years agoRE: Original Poem, Don't Blame MeMesmerizing, almost metronomic beat. Good rhyme, too. Teensy prob: I'm thinking "their" should be "they're"? Slightly bigger prob: Next-to-last line- beat suddenly stumbles. Last line- I'm…camnine (34)in story • 8 years agoRE: Hitching through the rural USA? No matter what you believe, the bible might just save your life.Too bad there are so many witless folks in the world whose idea of "entertainment" is to get plastered and go be someone's nightmare. But, then, there's folks like your own good self who, clearly…camnine (34)in writing • 8 years agoRE: The Reset (An Original Short Story)Holy, moly! "Noir" meets "Sci-Fi." Who'da thunk? Only, instead of the aspiring "widow" ending her hubby's life to steal his insurance... here, the "widow" ends her hubby's life... BY stealing…camnine (34)in writing • 8 years agoRE: The Scarmaker (An original short story)A very gentle, very sweet... very "human" story. The writing: thoughtful. The plot: intelligently... elegantly... addressed. A really lovely piece. Thanks so much for posting it. And please…camnine (34)in story • 8 years agoRE: Ups and downs (An Original Very Short Story)I'm afraid I couldn't help laughing when I read that line about Franky not minding Tami being pregnant (I guess meaning he would be willing to marry her) because she "knew how to behave at the…
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