Repliessteemitboard (66)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutCongratulations @davidkain! You received a personal award! Birthday! - You are on the Steem blockchain for 1 year! You can view your badges on your Steem Board and compare to others on…agmoore (64)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutI'll be looking for your stories. I get distracted and busy, so I hope I don't miss them. Good writing!deeanndmathews (66)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutThis brought tears to my eyes and creeped me out -- EXCELLENT writing in a lot of ways. It was like rolling Ten Little Indians, Lord of the Flies, Downfall, and some real facts from…agmoore (64)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutWithout getting into the details of whodunit...is the narrator reliable? Is the narrator pathological? Is the murderer one of the other three? I think this oversimplifies what you have created…calluna (63)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutOoo I can never completely trust the person who diffuses the situation and highlights the spread of blame… this is so well put together, you drop straight into the action, using carefully chosen…steemitboard (66)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutCongratulations @davidkain! You have completed the following achievement on the Steem blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s) : received more than 4000 upvotes. Your next target is to…hlezama (67)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutThat's some creepy gentlemanly agreement. Great story. Nothing scarier than semingly senseless killing and carefree perpetrators. Should we trust the narrator? :)curie (76)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - FalloutHi davidkain, This post has been upvoted by the Curie community curation project and associated vote trail as exceptional content (human curated and reviewed). Have a great day :) Visit…calluna (63)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - Open DumpYou know what, I think that sentence says it perfectly :p an almost 'if i can't be with my kids, neither can you' version? So caught up in the personal emotion of the moment that rational thinking…steemitboard (66)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - Open DumpCongratulations @davidkain! You have completed the following achievement on the Steem blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s) : received more than 100 as payout for your posts. Your…viking-ventures (69)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodI have observed that most moderately-successful diets have one main thing in common... They cut the crap and pay attention to what they're eating. That's why people say: "Oh, I feel so good!" I…lynncoyle1 (63)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodYou're most welcome @davidkain!calluna (63)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - Open DumpAhhh this is amazing, the way it opens so innocently, like walking into a room and the floor giving way straight into the mind of the killers. How you start focused on the moment, and the set up the…erh.germany (64)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodThank you, what a kind feedback from you.jeejee (52)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Airbag ExplosionHahaha!! It’s totally ok to laugh at my faceplant... I wasn’t laughing back then, but I do laugh now 🤪 I think the van very well could have had a bad dream! 🤷🏻♀️ @jeejeelynncoyle1 (63)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodI guess the diet industry would't be a multi-million dollar industry if more people understood and believed the truth you're telling! Good luck with the book sales; I hope it's a huge success…theironfelix (62)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodWhen they control the means of mental production, they can make magic into a science and science magic. Hue~ Cha-chiiiiing!~theironfelix (62)in writing • 5 years agoRE: [Short Story] - The missing socksCan yah buy air fare? Hue, us Slavs will have fun~chekohler (70)in payitforward • 5 years agoRE: Week 50 - Pay It Forward Curation EntryIt was a pleasure! Hope it helps in someway get you more exposure Posted using Partiko iOSerh.germany (64)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Do I Really Need Another Diet? - A psychological approach to your relationship with foodEveryone has their own placeholder for a lack. For me it was books that I ate. Knowledge that I devoured. Diaries which I wrote to the full. No matter if eating, knowledge, playing, buying…