Commentseightlines (29)in art • 7 years agoRE: TO A SPECIAL PERSON: LOVE IS NOT OURS TO OWN(smile)eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: WAR: A SOLDIERS PRAYER PART IIAhh, Not a critic, you got me wrong there bro. i simply analysed the poem, i don't know how to critic, I'm just a poet myself. Apropos: i don't see anything wrong with your poetryeightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: INTERESTING MEMORIES [88]Good lines, very good... Verse1, I see a person who derives joy in her responsibilities to someone and not sadness due to usage of words that depict sweet memory. Verse 2, Seems to have…eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: WAR: A SOLDIERS PRAYER PART IIHmmm, nice poetry... I observe a rise and fall in intonation and then a sudden rise again on the last line. At first it was a steady rise in form of sharp events around and then it drops…eightlines (29)in dsound • 7 years agoRE: Inessential integrali saw the point this poetry was trying to make through the first few lines, on the coronary of a flower. it is mostly the center of attraction while it really is just another kind of decoration.…eightlines (29)in philosophy • 7 years agoRE: Bear BonesI see wonder through the rise and fall of the ambitious, the rise- the true braveness, the fall an unexpected demise i felt every bit of this write upeightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: The MarketsFilling out sheets of corrupted pine leaf special brown crusted paper again waiting longing, lonely choking on air from passing trains And then just as if the market knew the words we loot, it…eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: All Our Tomorrowsrunning through a daze i met the earths greatest love and despondent mistake and in my race the world passed me by knowing i'll otherwise take its love away Great lines, gets me thinking…eightlines (29)in introduceyourself • 7 years agoRE: eighlines of : What can steemit do for me?Thanks a lot bruw, I'll definitely take to your advice, But what group is discord if i may ask?eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: eightlines: FATHERLESSThanks, Doris Adioha I get that you dont know much about poetry. But if you had read my introductory post, you would know then that poetry is not more than a few words from someone that has…eightlines (29)in introduceyourself • 7 years agoRE: A first step at connecting imaginations through words (an introductory post)Yea i had hoped so. Thanks for keeping that in touch. Here's my first post to that effect.eightlines (29)in introduceyourself • 7 years agoRE: A first step at connecting imaginations through words (an introductory post)Thanks a lot. Here's the linkeightlines (29)in poem • 7 years agoRE: [Poem - With Recitation] Tailor MadeYou're highly welcomeeightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Steemit poetry contest #11 " Solitude"thanks. Glad you felt it.eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Narrative PoetryFor when love is long gone and enterprise steals the candle with its stand and families hold us in reins and the heart is sold to vain we can say that the world is gone. My deduction from this…eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Poem / Deep Downi know the throbs of misery, the epiphany of complete dejection, through your eyes is played chords of my anathema the memories of you clubs me till my vertebral column shatters, into pieces of…eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: he dies in the endI'm glad to have pointed this out.eightlines (29)in tinfoilraps • 7 years agoRE: V4vapid Presents: Tin Foil Raps - A Paranoid Rhymes Contest - Winners Announced!!! [170 + STEEM Prizes]Wow, nice contest, nice entries. I hope i can participate in the next context tho'eightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: III — Mausoleum of GhostsGreat stuff, nice words. I'm starting something new on Steemit. Check it out @eightlineseightlines (29)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: I Gave Up On YouClouds of your thoughts be the cataract that seals my vision Thoughts of your desertion plunge detritus in my clogged arteries For the day you gave up on me is another day of mourning And the day…
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