Commentsgriff (64)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Muse (Original Short Fiction)Thank you for the response. Sorry for the delay, I've been off Steemit for a while. Just getting back into the swing of things. I agree completely about the last paragraph being forced. I felt…griff (64)in contest • 8 years agoRE: Lazy Wednesday - Easy 10 STEEM Giveaway! STAR WARS NameFit-Qu Ch-Cha It almost sounded like a real Jedi name until it turned into a jaunty dance. You throw your arms out front like a Rancor claw, then you Force Push up -- that's the Fit-Qu Ch-Cha.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Cold Heart (Original Short Fiction)I'm glad you're enjoying them!griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Cold Heart (Original Short Fiction)Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Ex-Somnus (Original Short Fiction)Thank you!griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Malaise of Youth (Original Short Fiction)Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.griff (64)in life • 8 years agoRE: Occulted Truth #5The way you phrased your post suggested that the "latter portion" was supposed to be support for the conclusion in the "former portion". I was pointing out that it wasn't. Your bizarre analogy to a…griff (64)in life • 8 years agoRE: Occulted Truth #5Neither the word "god" or "devil" have any etymological history with the words "good" or "evil". Both words are derived from other languages (Old English, German, Latin, Greek). It's pretty silly to…griff (64)in history • 8 years agoRE: Boskop Man: Ancient Humans With Extraordinarily Large Skulls - How Smart Were They?I was actually going to post something along these lines. Brain size != intellect. That's been shown through repeated tests. Even among humans, larger brains only equate to greater memory capacity.…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Memorandum In MemoriamThanks! I'm trying to experiment a little bit with storytelling methods. I'm glad you liked how this turned out.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Incident Report 08-03-53I certainly appreciate it, but I wouldn't think this is one of the more interesting parts of the story, unless you've followed the whole thing. With that in mind, I'll be posting something in the…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Transmission Log 07-20-53 | /*RESTRICTED FILES*/Hah, thanks.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Mission Log Epsilon-Beta-Two | /*Project: Eden*/Thanks! It's not quite done yet, but stick around. I'll be posting more in the next few days.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Research Report 07-01-53 | /*Project: Eden*/I'm notoriously bad about leaving comments, but I do follow your posts, so I'll try to drop some in the future.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Research Report 07-01-53 | /*Project: Eden*/Glad to hear it. I thought the unorthodox storytelling would put people off, but stick with it over the next several days to see where it's going.griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: NaNoWriMo Excerpt #3 -- The Girl (Outwilds)The birthmark is actually an important plot point. Believe me, I wouldn't have included it if it didn't have some real significance. EDIT You are right about it being cliche, though, so I…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: NaNoWriMo Excerpt #1 -- The Dealer (Somnolence)I guess I should have clarified, but this isn't the beginning of the novel. This particular excerpt actually comes from near the end of the book. I led off with this excerpt because it's the closest…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Darkness, Foe; Darkness, Friend (Original Short Fiction)You're right, it's ugly to look at. My original thinking when I wrote it was that it was one continuous experience -- one small piece of a child's life -- so it should run together, like a memory.…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: Darkness, Foe; Darkness, Friend (Original Short Fiction)Rereading this, saying it was an "experiment" is not entirely accurate. It was a writing exercise. I wanted to see if I could start a story with the phrase "It was dark", then write something…griff (64)in story • 8 years agoRE: The Wrecking Light (Original Short Fiction)Thank you!
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