Repliessteemitboard (66)in fiction • 5 years agoRE: The Best Things In Life...Congratulations @notjohndaker! You received a personal award! Birthday! - You are on the Steem blockchain for 2 years! You can view your badges on your Steem Board and compare to others…dorafox (25)in writing • 6 years agoRE: Be a Writer (if you want to)I realize that I am responding to an old post, but this post is awesome and inspirational.jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: The Best Things In Life...Aerial fights and tea parties! I love the name Chain-Breaker, too.jimfear138 (54)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: Death Flowers - Part 1Glad you liked it! And yeah, we can't have the main character being a completely inhuman monster. The readers need something to latch on to after all.jeffstoner (50)in writing • 6 years agoRE: The Missing MuseI agree with Cheah. Go do something different for a while. I've been ill lately, and I don't write well when I'm sick. I've spent a lot of time reading instead.cheah (69)in writing • 6 years agoRE: The Missing MuseWhen this happens to me, it's usually a sign of deep-seated fatigue, or some as-yet undiscovered flaw in the story. I've found that the best solution is to take a break, go do something else…jimfear138 (54)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: Bringing Down The Mountain - Part 1Well, I'm probably not the best at writing advice, but I've been trying to kind of unconsciously work it into my fiction while consciously working at it, if that makes any sense. Like I read it over…jimfear138 (54)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: Bringing Down The Mountain - Part 1I'm glad you're digging it! This was my most recently written story. I've got other stuff coming up after that I've written months or further back, but I was really happy with how this turned out…jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: You Work for Me NowI've been crafting narrative stories ever since I could talk. The ideas that became RBM had their genesis in 1985. It's a big universe by now. Just for fun, here's the basic outline of what…jimfear138 (54)in fiction • 6 years agoRE: Rats In The Sewers - Part 2This discrimination, stupid man-thing! Yes-yes!kenmwolfgang (46)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Hydroponic HoOkay, I'm dying. That was great. I agree with @cheah, in that the sentences were a little run-on at times. However, the core concepts were fantastic.cheah (69)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Hydroponic HoThot status: PATROLLED! There are a couple of formatting issues here, namely paragraphs being bunched together without line breaks, but nothing story-breaking. Prose-wise, the text tends to be…jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Hydroponic HoOK, that is too funny. ;-) Love the way the memes piled up in there. I knew we were in for it when the MC was named Chad...jimfear138 (54)in blog • 7 years agoRE: The JimFear138 Podcast Ep.85 - Mo' Guns, Manga Recs, & Darling in the FranxxThe weebshit is where the sperging out really begins. And of course not I'm not some Europleb ffs.jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Boy's Adventure Tale - Epilogue and ErrataThanks! Oskar will someday have another role to play, but he will not meet Inna again in this space/time continuum.jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Boy's Adventure Tale - Part 14As was inevitable. But there were leftovers...jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: BATTLE FOR THE PAST (Part V)It was! I hope you find time to write more.jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Boy's Adventure Tale - Part 13LOL about Christie! Eating good, being eaten bad. But If you've been going back and forth, I'm happy. The story reads as intended. Inna's supposed to be a monster, but she's a good monster, and one…jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: BATTLE FOR THE PAST (Part V)Bravo! Now I get the symbolism behind the dragon. All in all, a surprisingly sweet story, especially nice that it wraps up during Holy Week. More, please!jeffstoner (50)in fiction • 7 years agoRE: Boy's Adventure Tale - Part 13Coming soon. I'm still trying to wrestle chapter 14 down to a manageable size. It's as bloated as the Empress after a hot night with a savory Norwegian geeballer. (Did I just say that? Oops.)
