Commentstheverve (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: SACRED PLACES {An Original poetry} Day 81This is nice, though the language is a bit difficult. A person reading just for pleasure might stop on the way. However, the poem is wonderfully crafted and shows craftsmanship. Well done.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 79 "New Slaves"This is cool, the language is simple and easy and communicates a message clearly, without mincing words. Great job.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 81 "Stunt On The Haters"This is nice. It is confident and self-assuring without being mouthy and showing off.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68Thank you @acousticsteveotheverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #74Thank you so much too. I'm happy it helped.theverve (41)in steemitpoetrychallenge • 6 years agoRE: Speaking My Truth-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Seventy FourI love this! It's witty and beautifully crafted, self-confident without being conceited.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68Thank you for your honest opinion. I appreciate it. I've always thought home is not a specific place. Home is created wherever one wants it.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: The Smell of You - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #67Thank youtheverve (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Day 66 - Thicker Than WaterGood poem. The rhyme is is good and kind of different. I wonder at your fondness for long lines of poetrytheverve (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Day 67 - Nature, NurtureY'know, whenever most people write about nature, it's mostly descriptive. Your writing is different. Sure, it's descriptive but it's also different. It speaks about nature in a whole new light. I…theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #60😂😂.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #66I'm glad you related to the poem. There's sth freeing about being away from the fluorescence of artificial lighting and noise of human creation and being alone with nature. I'm sorry about your…theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years agoRE: I Am-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Sixty FiveThe rhythm of the poem is beautiful. And the persona's voice is strong. It encourages the reader to be too.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: My Powerful Lesson-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty EightI like the open honesty in this poem. It's beautiful and strengthening, in a funny sort of way. I feel as if the persona is relieved she shared and makes me want to share.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: Our Own Masters-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty ThreeI could actually feel movement from the poem because of how its shaped. I don't know if that was intended but it's certainly a good effect.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: Ink Up - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #48Well, it is. Awesome actually.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: Untitled - 100 Days of Poetry Day #40Well, I'm still searching for my answer.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: A Gentleman's Anger - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #2Thank you. When I was through writing it, I felt like a little child watching something he couldn't control. I think that's how my narrator felt. Is that weird?theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: Fluid - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #8Thank you for taking the time to read.theverve (41)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: Her - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #9Thank you. I wasn't quite sure I nailed it but I feel much better about it now.
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