Commentsuhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Haiku - SandsA refreshing and meditative haiku. The choice to use sand as the vehicle for the commentary on time was especially prudent. Thanks for the post!uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Haiku: Swaying GrassesI enjoy the image you conjure of the grass. When I read the description, I feel like I'm there. Thanks for the post!uhhhighlordtimes (41)in mystery • 6 years agoRE: WHO IS SHE? (Original Haiku)A beautiful and thoughtful poem. The line, "saw her from afar" does well in leading the poem toward its mysterious and meditative terminus: "The girl with no names." It reminds me of how people can…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in haiku • 6 years agoRE: Guest post by @ailindigo: Haiku #7I enjoyed this thoughtful poem. The accompanying picture really hits home the line, "the facts and no facts." I look forward to reading more.uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Haiku: EmbersI appreciate your distinction between the traditional haiku and the freestyle haiku. Translations have shown that the beauty of a haiku exists in more than syllable count (a restriction more suited…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Show Me The Power of Your WordsThe piece makes great strides with its use of expressive sentence structure and diction. Looking forward to the next one.uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poem • 6 years agoRE: Placebo Effect- Original PoetryA fun (but very truthful) poem. I enjoyed the whimsical rhythm of the piece and the choices you made in the rhyme. I especially enjoyed this line: "I know the stance, I'll get the doc back. / Grind…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: With silence (Poetry)I love the repetition and your use of refrain. Each time you use the refrain "With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced" the lines gather more momentum and gravity, lending power to…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in dsound • 6 years agoRE: a planner, darklyI enjoy the sound devices you use in this piece. The alliteration, meter, and rhyme all work in tandem to produce melodic verse which further highlights the strong imagery you've chosen. I enjoyed…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Redemption (A Poem)This is a powerful poem. The contrast between darkness and light and the poignant imagery contribute to an interesting, thought-provoking meditation on the nature of redemption. The use of a broken…uhhhighlordtimes (41)in poetry • 6 years agoRE: Art + HaikuThank you for the feedback!uhhhighlordtimes (41)in philosophy • 6 years agoRE: The Birth of Ego and the Tree of ThoughtProfound words, sir.uhhhighlordtimes (41)in introduction • 6 years agoRE: Hello SteemitThank you for your support dricestudio!
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