Repliespddeane (25)in poetry • 9 months agoRE: Old English Style Alliterative PoetryGreetings! I edit Forgotten Ground Regained (alliteration.net), a website devoted to modern English alliterative verse. I recently came across this post and several others you've written in…steemitboard (66)in writing • 5 years agoRE: Forgotten Places - A PoemCongratulations @whoshim! You received a personal award! Birthday! - You are on the Steem blockchain for 2 years! You can view your badges on your Steem Board and compare to others on…steemitboard (66)in writing • 6 years agoRE: Forgotten Places - A PoemCongratulations @whoshim! You received a personal award! Year on Steemit Click here to view your Board of Honor Support SteemitBoard's project ! Vote for its witness and get…minnowsupport (70)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Forgotten Places - A PoemCongratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Whoshim from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem…vitkolesnik (62)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Forgotten Places - A PoemA very deep and philosophical verse. Thank you for sharing!poetrybyjeremy (58)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Turned Tables (Poetry)I found it so uncomfortable and strange to write in such a way. I understand you completely, as I tend to follow the grammatical rules (and if I break them, it tends to be unintentional). Sometimes…geekorner (58)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: A Reflective HaikuI think it is interesting how you can switch the order of the lines. I personally would've placed the first line last. Or switched one line out, any but the middle one, really. The sun dips the…geekorner (58)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Postdiluvian DisorderThere are some small grammar-punctuation things I'd have pointed out. I do think it should be "our children," or "the toddlers," as "our toddlers" feels to me to break the flow, and I wouldn't go…minnowsupport (70)in writing • 7 years agoRE: Postdiluvian DisorderCongratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Whoshim from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem…poetrybyjeremy (58)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: A Dream - An Alliterative PoemI love these poems of yours which describe a past, nostalgic event so beautifully. There's the story of the past that we live through vividly, as well as the reminder of the present, how it all…steemitboard (66)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: A Dream - An Alliterative PoemCongratulations @whoshim! You have completed some achievement on Steemit and have been rewarded with new badge(s) : Award for the number of posts published Click on any badge to view your…minnowsupport (70)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: A Reflective HaikuCongratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Whoshim from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem…liverussian (48)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Ten - An Alliterative PoemWhat could be a better gift than a poem, - a poem written by your very own husband! A poem that keeps those little treasured memories of how your journey has begun! I'm sure she'll cherish this…geekorner (58)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Ten - An Alliterative PoemGood piece. We got there :) You know I always said that your pieces were lacking you actually putting in what mattered to you, and that they were best, and quite good, when they had that. This…minnowsupport (70)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Ten - An Alliterative PoemCongratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Whoshim from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem…wolfmaiden (40)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Ten - An Alliterative PoemGreat poem to express your love to your wife. I just celebrated 7 yrs with my wife on Monday. May you and your wife celebrate many more years to come. Have a wonderful and blessed day @whoshim!geekorner (58)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: A Handful of Haiku to Greet the DayI think it was the Haiku Contest Results that gave me the urge to write haiku again. Then I wrote the very first haiku in this collection. And it was good enough to make me come up with the…hazem91 (62)in steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years agoRE: They Were Great (day 65)HAA yes I think it's a similar story also :)steemitboard (66)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Purple Sunset - A PoemCongratulations @whoshim! You have completed some achievement on Steemit and have been rewarded with new badge(s) : You got your First payout Click on any badge to view your own Board of…minnowsupport (70)in poetry • 7 years agoRE: Purple Sunset - A PoemCongratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by Whoshim from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem…