Commentszeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #15: November Partner Week (Art Class)This was a really interesting read, @phil-glaz and @mgaft1! I like the ties between art and history. Nice job!zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: Art Class- The Allure Of Pain. A We-Write Short StoryWell done @zeleiracordero and @sarez! I love the concept of a dark muse, and your description of Liam's connection/love with her was really interesting with great flow! Congrats on the curie! As…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #14: At the ClubYou made it in time!zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: Accident At The Club- My We-write EntryWhat a creative conspiracy, nice job!zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #14: At the Club/MoonstruckI was hoping someone would have Toby and Jan fall in love! Well told, and I love the happy ending. The prediction of the silvery moon is a nice touch ✨🌒zeldacroft (57)in writing • 5 years agoRE: The Rise of Ptolos Part One: One Last HopeThank you!zeldacroft (57)in writing • 5 years agoRE: The Rise of Ptolos Part One: One Last HopeWow, thank you so much! 😊zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #11: Home AloneWow, that's a lot. In my part of New England a good two-story is more like $200,000. I've even seen apartments with multiple stories.zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #11: Home AloneIf that happens I hope you'll still leave a link. It might not be an entry but at least we'd get to read it 🙂zeldacroft (57)in freewrite • 5 years agoRE: Climber, a WeWrite FreewriteBusted, itchy with poison ivy, AND grounded on Halloween? That would certainly teach them a lesson, but I have a feeling the lesson would be to avoid poison ivy, maybe not to stop sneaking…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: Wanna Play? (We-Write #11)Ooh this was so wonderfully creepy! I love the quick but well done pace at which it changed from fun to scary. Do you think Nathan made it out alive?zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #11: Home AloneSometimes weird is good 🙂 Personally, I imagined them living in kind of generic American suburbs, where a single mom with a two-story house isn't that unusual. It depends where you are in the…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: We-Write #11: Home AloneThere was good flow here, I could easily picture them talking. I like how you put traces of tension in the scene, building up towards the end! And poor Liz, she’s not in safe company especially…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: The Streetlight (We-Write #11)It's completely up to you! Some people like to leave a cliffhanger, others prefer to wrap everything up, any way is fine. A big theme of the contest is to just have fun and play with where you…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: Home Alone- Winner. Short Story. A We-Write EntryThat's so kind of you! I'd say that's a question for @mariannewest, she's the one who would know about the @freewritehouse Snax. Thanks for your support!zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: The Streetlight (We-Write #11)Welcome to We-Writes! I like the dialogue between Nathan and Mark, it felt very natural. I wonder what they stumbled upon with the moms, it's quite intriguing.zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: Home Alone- Winner. Short Story. A We-Write EntryThis was a really nice read, it reminds of some fun game nights I had growing up. It felt realistic, and I like that you ended it with promises of more games to come for Nathan and Kynie (and…zeldacroft (57)in freewrite • 5 years agoRE: There's Adventure Out There (a Freewrite)Oh my gosh, thank you so much!!!zeldacroft (57)in freewrite • 5 years agoRE: There's Adventure Out There (a Freewrite)Thank you, I’m glad you liked it! Thank goodness Stanley went and found Livingstone, so we could read his journal and learn more of his experiences. And yes, there’s something special about the…zeldacroft (57)in wewrite • 5 years agoRE: The Manor House - We-Write #10Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And congrats on the Curie!
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