Passage of dim light

in absurd •  7 years ago  (edited)

Passage of dim light

original poetry


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I ramble through a tunnel of maple toxicity;
It's the animal spirit's conjunction
With the saccharine world
Overripe with pleasure,
Overrun by the wicked.

There is some nightmare aspect of decay
That pursues me down the hallways of mind
Screaming senseless curses into my past,
Slashing dream curtains with a
Hatchet inscribed with
The svastika.

Carbon earthman
Who mocks the mystical:
You are a thorn in the side
Of the planetary lithocatepillar
Whose metamorphosis is the liquefaction
Of the entire earth's insides.

Hydrogen spacewoman
And the host of infamy
Spreading a cloying touch
Through the galactic current,
Masters of seduction & generation:
Why must the living devour each other?

Why must the light require darkness?
The mortals with infantile queries
Mummified in the frigid shell
Of dualistic hallucination
Carve their tunnels through
Sweet bitterness of the
Lush, unsavory world.


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Written by
@d-pend
2/20/18
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Photos by
Lora Palmer

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1 --- "Welcome to Twin Peaks"
2 & 3 --- "Morning on road"
[in halves]

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nice poetry . Famous saying "nothing can dim the light that shines from within".

When the omnipresent echo resounded in the mountains
of wisdom?
When was it that the man stopped feeling the embrace of the wind
on the skin of his back?
When was the last time you presented yourself to the world with your face of stone, you sang to the spirits, let the water run through your cracks, and with the drops that fell from the tips of your fingers, you tore the lands that now they cry submerged under fear?
Woe to those times when we would still be brothers, we would open our eyes to greet the morning.
@d-pend, we would say, and we would still be land and sky
before the look of nature.

your poetry always is somewhere between the reality and the Absract world, it speaks about something close and familiar but from the other hand it's very far from ordinary life and usual way of perception

I always reread your poetry several times, very slowly to enjoy all your mind games and language figures, because it seems to me it can be opened and clear not so easy as it may seem.

@d-pend, Absolutely deepest endless thoughts indeed poetry. I'm wondering and excited to read darkness story. Passage on dim light expand my whole soul and I'm wanna see my deepest mind end. Anythings can understand better inside deep mindset. I think this bring around whole our life. Darkness happened to life through our worst activities. As my religious leader Lord Buddha told "If some people did wrong task to community, bad result will come backward him; also someone did best thing to society he'll best result". In Buddhism, clearly mentioned it name called "KARMA". So peoples always must need to follow best instructions.
Life given to both sides to choose. Every time try to find best way. It's a lightning way..It's harder to find and need long term for take light to our life. Dim light is still way between of light and darkness. Dark can easily reach. But final result so bad...Thank you for given me meditation through your poetry.

Through the darkness we can see the light and and through that light we see the work we are doing in consciousness and opening a window to an inner reality. Where the inner reality will reveal the innermost thoughts of things left unsaid.

"Passage of dim light". Poetry is always able to illuminate the empty soul when life again a lot of problems and thoughts again dead end. Poetry can always be a light for those of us who have empty thoughts. Because the words of poetry always have a very profound meaning for those who are again desperate. Your poetry can always be a light for the crowd. Like a moon and a star that illuminates nature while night is darkness. Your work will always be able to accompany me when I think again to write a poem. Thanks and best wishes for you @d-pend ... :)

with @d-pend, there's an almost endless stream of classic poetry.
Yes...there's always been question of the dualistic nature of life.
This you have captured beautifully in the last stanza with your perfect oxymorons of light and darkness, and the "sweet bitterness"of a "lush unsavory" world.
Keep writing, i am definitely learning.

It's really unique and beautiful poetry @d-pend. All the words that you have used are really fabulous and attractive. I really like your poetry. Light thinks it traveles faster than anything but it is wrong. No matter how fast light travels, it finds the darkness has always got there first and is waiting for it. After darkness comes the light. Thanks for sharing your beautiful feelings and thoughts through this amazing poetry.

We have own way of karma in galactic mind. We need to change our life with soul poetry throught your immortal words. Thank you foe amazing poetry my honest friend @d-pend.

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I could feel the intrepid interlocking of emotions, in fact, sometimes one must muse about some things.

Why must the light require darkness?
The mortals with infantile queries
Mummified in the frigid shell
Of dualistic hallucination
Carve their tunnels through
Sweet bitterness of the
Lush, unsavory world.

Light must require darkness to reign supreme, although at times scribbling these poem makes you really key into your inner mind and make you so encapsulated with emotion you basically pen words it's like it's living in the blood.

This one is sweet as sugar baked in ice cube, I'm really glad I read @d-pend.

How have you been?

Beautiful written poetry

Darkness and lightness both are necessary on earth .

I read it like a song is that okey,? 😅

Aristotle. “ Just remember, a dark shadow need light to exist but light doesn't need darkness to be luminous.

Nice post 💜

In every darkness there must be light, in every evil there must be goodness ..
Thanks for the poetry today @d-pend

Poetry is the besth .I like @d-pend
I want to write like you

the passage life is as decorative tip to the story,
the struggle of releasing the gloom and the light explains the tunnel so that there would be certainty.
thanks @d-pend for best poetry today

wow. just wow @d-pend. I'm your follower and a fan now. I also posted about poetry a while ago. I'm new to this community and I really want to learn more about poetry. Anyway, good job mate 👍

Awesome poetry Great writing keep it up my favorite stanza is
Hydrogen spacewoman
And the host of infamy
Spreading a cloying touch
Through the galactic current,
Masters of seduction & generation:
Why must the living devour each other?

Really great poetry love the way you use the word and make it really beautiful poem...your post are really impressive you must be professional..and also like your photo..well done my friend @d-pend

interstingg!! this big question Why must the light require darkness

Use of parallel in your poetry really impressed me. This is your great quality to express this natural beauty of the world and imaginary beauty of the universe . Really you are a great poet dear. I always with you . Thank you very much for sharing this post with us .

good picture, I like

Poetry is the besth .I like @d-pend
I want to write like you

The first line "I ramble through a tunnel of maple toxicity" hooked me and read the entire poem. You have a way with words. Mind blown.

another masterpiece glad I found this account.

Nice Song mate, @d-pend. Photos are awesome.

Big smile here. I am with you every step of the way through the forest. Winter is over but the question rings out:

Why must the light require darkness?

It is a sad story a vicious cycle that needs to end. No regulation or human chains can make any effect. It is love and humility that will conquer in the end. I love how you can take a walk in the park and turn it into a question of humanity. You have a gift. I thank God for you and for the lives I share with everyday. Now I am going to spend some precious moments with those I love.

That would be a great thoughtful poem. Nice explained passage life via your thoughts. It's surely impressive and giving me inspiration across your professional skills. Lights can be delight life also can be darkness. Decision in our hand. Thanks for sharing us @d-pend.

Your such an inspiration. Your words are sharp. It cuts right through my heart.

i don't want to miss any post from you.
love you and your post.

That's very powerful, been rather busy but glad I had some time to check this piece out. I too pondered the need for duality many times

Wow I especially love the last stanza ♥

When darkness fall in our life, than only one thing dim light can remove the darkness in around us, so we should never fear about darkness,, every night after a beautiful morning ful of sunlight than we can see everything clear in full of light...
your poetry is a truly pick the question and how can I passage of dim light. I appreciate your kind words in this poem..

the beautiful strains of words, the reflection of life full of meaning, life full of twists and turns, I love the poetry about life

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Some question are unanswerable or even we can't find the best answer of our un asked questions like why light always required darkness? In simple words, light can be come from any direction when your life become hell and darked at every side.

Brilliant Outclassed Poetry!! Do you have your own book where your all poetry tales placed? Or you just posted on steemit? :)

In every darkness there must be light, in every evil there must be goodness ..
Thanks for the poetry today @d-pend

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This is so beautiful. ♥ I love your use of imagery.