ADSactly Poetry - When the rain comes...

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When the rain comes...

How do you feel today, kind readers? I have taken up my readings and with them my daily routine, although it has been a little difficult for me to move forward: the sky has been dressed in grey and there is a feeling of rain in the city. The cold and the smell of wet earth impregnate everything, leaving us wanting to stay at home or go out to breathe the fresh air. There is a well-known phrase that says that who says that the sun is the maximum happiness, is because it has not danced in the rain.

When I was a girl, I remember that my parents wouldn't let me get wet with the rain and they were always locking me in the house and dressing me in thick clothes so that not a drop would fall on my body. When I grew up, dancing, walking, even kissing in the rain became my favorite and unforgettable activities. Not to mention, after the smell of freshly brewed coffee, the smell of rain is my favorite. I think many will agree with me!


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Rain, more than an atmospheric phenomenon and a state of the weather, also arouses many emotions among people. Some are sensual and others melancholic (I sign up for these two). It also generates stress in people who have planned to perform diligences and because of the rain can not perform them. It depresses other people because it reminds them of some sad moment in their lives. Everything will depend on the mood of people, but no one is going to be unmoved by the rain.

Poets are not insensitive to rainy days and have also written about them. Their poems often invite us to that serene, almost magical introspection when we make contact with ourselves, through words and memories of rainy days. Let's read some of those poems.


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Let's begin our reading with one of the great Spanish-speaking writers, the Argentine Jorge Luis Borges and his poem La lluvia. Here I write the last two strophes:

This rain that blinds the crystals
will rejoice in lost arrabales
the black grapes of a vine in certain
...
that no longer exists. The humid day
brings me the voice, the desired voice,
of my father who comes back and hasn't died.

With these two strophes we corroborate what we said before: the rain allows us to remember, to feel what we have already lived. These days I read that winter days and rainy days, when there is less light, cause our serotonin levels to drop. This increases feelings of sadness and nostalgia, as well as apathy. From there we can look at the rain and remember, not only the pleasant moments but also the sad ones, yearning for people, moments, places. It is as if all your life comes to you all of a sudden with the rain. In this strophes the rain not only refreshes the most remote and invisible places, it also refreshes the thought. That is why the lyrical voice remembers the father, deceased, as he was before. An association between the voice of the father and the sound of the rain.


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Another of the poems I would like to mention is one by the Argentine poet Alfonsina Storni, called Tentación:

It rains outside; the water falls heavily
that people dodge under open umbrellas.
When I see them lined up, my serenity ends,
I weigh the walls and I'm seduced by the watering
on the free back. My predecessor, the man
that inhabited caverns unnamed,
has come tonight to tempt me without a doubt,
because, chaste and naked,
I'd go through the fields in the fine rain,
winged hair like a swallow.

Beyond the erotic force of this poem, there is a female force that breathes between its lines. Like many of us and as we said at the beginning, society has taught us to avoid the rain, to protect ourselves from it. Rain is like impure water that we must avoid. Rainwater awakens our bodies, makes them vibrate, makes them more human and more savage. In this sense, we see that the lyrical voice, before the image of a group of people hiding from the rain, thinks of their ancestors, those who never saved themselves, and wants to dance, walk, under the water that falls from the sky. The reference to the "winged hair like a swallow", not only refers to the black color, also to the air, to the loose and free hair that dances with the breeze. It is an image that sends us to freedom.


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Another famous poet who has surrendered to the rain and has written about it, is Mario Benedetti. His poem Rain is an example of this. Of this poem I only write here the first and last stanza:

The rain is tired of raining
I'm tired of seeing her in my window.
it's like I'm washing the promises and
the joy of living and hope.

The strange thing is, it doesn't just rain outside,
another enigmatic rain and no water at all
surprise catch
and it's raining in surprise
in the heart
it rains in the soul.

The most obvious feature of this poem is that there is a contemplation of the rain from within. The one who looks is inside the house and looks at how it rains outside. That rain cleanses and brings a new sense of hope. Likewise, in the last stanza, we observe that it can also rain inside each one of us. Inside of us, when we observe the rain, there is a kind of flood of feelings, which purify you, wash you and leave you lighter, without weight. It is as if with the rain all the sighs escaped and with each one of them the 21 grams that the soul weighs were gone.


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Although the sky does not caress us with rays of sunshine, there is no reason to see everything in black and white on rainy days. What if we put color to that day resting a little. Or we go into the kitchen and make a delicious dessert, they are ideal for rainy days. We can also watch old or new movies that we have pending. Perhaps reading a good book is a good option and helps us stay animated and listen to ourselves. Or simply make us want to write, look out the window, have a cup of coffee or a hot chocolate while we remember the days that are gone and feel those that are to come. In any case, whatever the plan, let's think that the sun will come out later, which as Alan Watts said: "The sound of rain doesn't need translation", and you just have to live it and enjoy it.


I hope you have enjoyed this text and that showers of blessings will fall upon you. Remember to vote for @adsactly as a witness and join our server in discord. Until the next smile. ;)

BIBLIOGRAPHICAL REFERENCES

https://www.poemas-del-alma.com/la-lluvia.htm
https://poemas.yavendras.com/de-lluvia.php
http://mariobenedettipoesia.blogspot.com/2017/09/lluvia-mario-benedetti.html

Written by: @nancybriti

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I really liked your post, @nancybriti, because, besides sharing that attraction for rain, you manage to express in your pleasant words the emotional richness that rain awakens in us, as if it were the aromatic smell that makes the contact with the earth sprout. Although you are within the scope of the poem, I remember two stories that focused on me with their recreation of this phenomenon: "Lluvia" by Arturo Úslar Pietri and "Garúa" (beautiful Spanish word of America almost untranslatable) by Eduardo Galeano. And from the cinema I was left with a scene recorded in my affective and visual memory where rain is associated with melancholy and death (a meaning not commonly connected with it); it is the final scene of Blade runner. Thank you for your beautiful post. Greetings.

I know the two literary and cinematographic references you quote, and I totally agree with you, @josemalavem. Both texts are wonderful and poetic. I remember the first time I read Garúa, the word stayed ringing not only in my memory but also in my heart. There are people who are like Garúa: a soft and small drizzle. Thank you for always commenting, @josemalavem.

The rain has been a source of inspiration for everyone at one time or another.
That feeling of longing that awakens and that sadness gives reason to overturn our feelings in front of the paper and let us go. and from the sadnesses also arise joys and rewards as we can appreciate in this stanza of a poem by Gustavo Adolfo Bécquer.

How beautiful it is after the rain
of the sad autumn in the bluish afternoon,
of the humid flowers
the perfume suck till you're satiated!

The rain, an element of the nature with which we can throw the imagination to fly.
Again satisfied to find in @adsactly and the hand of @nancybriti an entry with so much style.

That's right. Many artists have surrendered to the rain and created works inspired by it. Just as he does with the earth that makes it more fertile, so he does with the imagination of the artist: he makes the best of him sprout. Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem by Bécquer and for your kind comment, @evagavilan.

Your rain is very beautiful. I can not type out so delicate words to describe the common nature. Indeed people often have that feeling that rain brings us happiness and sadness. It drops on the face and also drops on the heart with its temperature and pitter-patter。I enjoy sleeping in sound of raining very much. Tks for sharing so deep feeling article.

Yes, sleeping with the sound of rain is a unique experience. Thank you for commenting.

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Good job, interesting choice


writing that presents the rain as poetry inspiration. When reading the poem that you reviewed, I immediately remembered the rain that always came with the season. In our tropical country we know the rainy season and the dry season. When it first rains we will feel the smell of the earth splashed with drizzle. A typical smell that reminds us of deep longing. Like dry land that longs for rain suddenly comes droplets of water from the sky making a longing for cash.
When raindrops flow between the window slits or see the flow of water from the roof makes us miss the childhood playing in the rain, running or even dancing.
There is excitement that is so overflowing that we do not need to dodge by hiding behind the umbrella. This joy exceeds the pain of getting sick after the rain.
Likewise the sound of rain on the roof or the roof of the house gives a beautiful and lively feel and rhythm so you want to go out to just catch the flow of water from the roof of the house.
only because it is not wise to act, then the longing for rain as a child is now lost by the many floods. Hopefully not to lose our sanity to do. not then blame the rain when the flood disaster comes
thank you @nancybriti
Thank you @adsactly
thank you steemit
Warm regard from Indonesia

Very beautiful comment, @rokhani. I think everyone has a particular experience with rain. It's true, I imagine that some people will blame the rain for some disasters, without thinking that it is the unconsciousness of man that causes some tragedies. Thank you for always commenting.

Excellent work, @nancybriti. I share with you the taste for the aroma of freshly brewed coffee and the smell of rain. I love the rain, to observe it and also to enjoy it, but also with the rain the sadness, the anguish and the sorrows of the soul are conjugated and then when the storm passes, the relief of the relief is felt. I like Benedetti's poem very much because it describes well that cold and grey feeling that sometimes invades us. Thank you for your publication, @nancybriti and @adsactly for promoting it.

The rain is perfect to awaken all feelings and memories! I imagine that the closest feeling will sprout: joy, love, but also nostalgia, pain, fear. The rain should not be the same for the one who is at home with the loved one, as the one who is homeless or has the house on the river bank. Two visions of rain! Thank you very much for always commenting, @aurodivys

And what you think about the smell of soil when it starts raining ? @adsactly, for me it takes my heart.

Indisputably!