Hello I hope all the @adsactly community and your @churchboy are well... @churchboy lets me start by saying....

Friend what an incredible story, always your stories are incredible, I only have a small annotation, I will be brief, I will avoid to extend myself as in previous occasions.

The story itself is relatively perfect,

However...

I think the ending is a bit depressing, so while I was reading I imagined a happy ending, they on a boat with the typical ending of

"Happy forever"

However, I also like the sad endings, agonizing and all that, so I give you a 10 out of 10, because the story has been great even though it does not end as I expected, you have much merit and talent .

@churchboy @adsactly Greetings to everyone from Venezuela, hits!