RE: ADSactly Short Story - Racing for Life

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ADSactly Short Story - Racing for Life

in adsactly •  6 years ago 

I really liked this story, @churchboy! I almost lost my breath in the chase. I can understand the people in the neighborhood, but not the behavior of the aunt. How miserable and without feeling, I hate it! I liked the structure you used in this story: start with the end, go to the past and return to the present. Also that the aunt's character would have died! Thank you for writing interesting stories and @adsactly for sharing.

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Thank you. I needed to make the chase as real as I could. I am glad you liked it @nancybriti.