Thank you for participating in s22 w1 teaching challange!
Criteria | Status |
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Plagiarism 🆓 | ✅ |
AI 🆓 | ✅ |
Category | Remark |
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Task 1 | 0/1.5 |
Task 2 | 1.35/1.5 |
Task 3 | 2/3 |
Task 4 | 1.6/3 |
Post quality | 0.55/1 |
Total grade | 5.5/10 |
Teacher's Observation
Task 1 review | In task 1,it seems that you have a clear understanding of variables and expressions but how much it would be good if you read out actual thing or actual requirement you have to do for completion of task 1 so here you have explained about dependent and independent variable along their good examples but I have asked to write those types which are not explained in class and secondly you have not discussed about types of expressions at all so I can't give you any point for this task unfortunately! |
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Task 2 review | In task 2, you are absolutely right that if we have to solve or evaluate any algebraic expression then we can use PEMDAS rule which is used in that order as it is arranged alphabetically so you have taken an expression 3x + 10 = 2(x+10) and you have evaluated it by using PEMDAS rule but I have not seen our comprehensive explanation in each step by you! It was not only about writing just some words! You can see some good entries that have explained this task more than requirement and hence they got full grade! |
Task 3 review | In task 3, expression 3(2x - 1) + 2(x + 4) - 5 , expression (x^2 + 2x - 3) / (x + 1) when x = 2 and expression 2x + 5 = 3(x - 2) + 1 are simplified ,evaluated and solved by you and I can't say that your solution is wrong but I can say that anyone can write or solve these algebraic expressions in this way so the thing that can make your task different from other entries was to add unique theory about your solution or even if not you need then at least step by step explanation that what are you doing in each step of each question and your images are also some darker so this is an average effort by you! |
Task 4 review | In task 4,if I talk about scenerio number 1 then it would be more good to present number of white bread sold with variable x because it is already provided in the question but no problem if you are using w, but you should at least take a good start with proper formatting,but overall Total daily profit = $0.5(w) + $0.75(w+30) is true which can also be simplified more!If I talk about scenerio number 2,then here your calculations are wrong just because of minus sign you put in between parentheses and I don't know if it is asked to calculate total cost then how you can put minus in between parentheses because if someone will say to calculate total number of Candies in which one person represented by X have 20 candidates and other person represented by Y have 4 candies then I will add candies from X and Y in this way X+Y=20+4=24 but you did it like this (20-4)!I don't know how but your answer for this question is not true along step by step explanation!Not good effort at all! |
Recommendations:
Before you I have received many good entries so if you have read out entries and my reviews at them then you may understand that how the competition is going on as well as it was obvious to be as detailed as possible for enhancing Jo chance to get full marks as well as you have shown and unresponsible behaviour while attempting task 1 that you don't know what I have actually asked but no worries as I have deducted your marks then I am sure that you will not repeat it again if you take my recommendations at serious note!
I wish you good luck for the next task!