Hi dear steemians!
I have created this story by inspiring on one of the real incident that I heard. Hope you all like it....
There was a pilot married to a beautiful woman, they had happy life. Pilot came to live in a house with his wife, parents and his younger brother. Pilot often traveled abroad due to his work, and in those days his brother helps his wife for her needs such as shopping, driving and bill paying etc. and there was a friendship among them.
One day the pilot's flight suddenly lost its communication, the plane disappeared, the control room did not get any information signal from the aircraft. From Mumbai at 6 pm the departure plane should have arrived in Singapore at around 11 pm but did not reach till 6 am of next day, The Government of India and the Government of Singapore were sent their crew in the search for the aircraft. At the same time, pilot's family were very distressed and , his wife was crying whole day.
Days passed, the flight could not be found, the airline reported that everyone traveling had died Although Pilot's family refused to accept what had happened, they had no other way of doing things except to homage him and she became a widow.
In a couple of months later, Pilot's brother told to his father that he would marry her, and I would be proud of giving my life to a widow. thinking of her need of companion, they asked her to agree to marriage. At first she was reluctant, but then she agreed and got married.
They lived happily, and they business started with pilot's Insurance claimed money and service returns. But their happiness not continue further more.
Last month, the Indonesian army had arrested three people, claiming they were spies, and handed them to India and said after a long inquiry they came to know that those three men also traveled on a missing flight, the plane crashed in the sea, and while they fled through the parachute and were trapped in the tribes of Indonesia on an island. About 2 months later, after a long struggle, they escaped from the tribe surrender to army. That pilot was one of those three men.
What's the same confusion for the pilot family, what will his wife do? Would she be happy that the pilot is alive? or she would be sad....Everything is a game of fate.
The next day the pilot reported that they were coming to town, and his parents went to the airport to welcome him, Pilot happily looked at them and also shocked that his wife did not come to receive him, they are all went into the car.
Pilot asked the parent ,' Why my wife did not come to see me?'
'She is not in a position to oppose you' his father replied.
'why ..what happened to her? ' is she okey?
'She was very sad to think that you were dead, and after a long try, your brother married her She was upset by the guilt'.
The pilot was silent, and thought that he came back and made a mistake.'I do not want to be in the midst of their happy life. The car then went through a high bridge, the pilot suddenly open the door and jumped out commited suicide.
At the same time, his wife unable to resist the pilot, she felt very guilty and she also committed suicide in the house.
And his brother heard these two sad news, and thought they both died because of him, and he also committed suicide as he was guilty.
In fact, no one is guilty, but fate played a well role in this story.
Thank you for reading my post, don't forget to upvote if you like this. Through this post I would like to thank all my well wishers,supporters and upvoters.
I Completely agree, But I did not like the way this story ended. I mean no offense here, but the ending has given the character a new face in my opinion.
The pilot - I am sure he has gone through all the possible scenario in his mind and is prepared mentally to deal with the whatever tragedy lies ahead. Suicide does no justice to the character.
The Wife - The women was the widow of the pilot. And later when she was ready to move on with the life she agreed to marry another person. This decision of hers shows that she is a practical woman. And suicide is not very likely her.
The Brother - Kind and caring, He cared so much about the family that he is willing to marry the widow of his brother. And the suicide is not the way for this man. As he would think about the parents also.
I am sure the gathering would have been really very awkward and interesting. I honestly liked the characters but the unfortunate events turned them dead.
Keep witing :D
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I agree with u
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There is no offense, but they cannot face each other. Pilot thought let them live, wife thought that she could not hurt the pilot and cant live with two men. His brother thought he destroyed their life
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No offence taken. I am just putting my opinion on the story. The actions of the pilot I cannot imagine is what I was saying, they were returning back from airport and he jumped out of the car. While his parents were there in the very same car. The wife suicide was a complicated case and the brother suicide is most unfortunate because it results of other two poor judgements.
Again I am just putting my views here it may differ from others.
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okey! thanks for the review
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Really a fate that make them loose their life...but wat wud had been the solution ....any answer?
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there is a solultion, if they don't care of society
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Nice story you given
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thank you dear
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fate never left any one unpunished if he has done any wrong thing karma ka chakras will always rolling no one can get out from that cycle.. that's why i say be good to everyone even if he is your enemy.
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I AGREE WITH YOU
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@jyoti-thelight really inspiring , share more
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THANKS DEAR
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A great written story my friend:-)
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thank you dear
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I'm sorry but i have to ask.. why is there a poster from the Twilight series? HAHA
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THANK YOU
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Nice story, keep posting! Thanks!
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thank you
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Thank You good post bro :)
Teşekkür ederim konu için :)
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THANK YOU
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following and follow me please
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Well written story...
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thank you for the apreciation
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Nice story
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THANK YOU
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Very well narration, interesting stoty
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thank you
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This is really nice... I love your stories, keep it up
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THANK YOU DEAR
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Hey you're getting better every time! thats awesome! :)
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thank you dear
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Beautiful story
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thank you
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keep it up!
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