Trying to do poetry in the 21st century (Intentando hacer poesía en siglo XXI)

in art •  5 years ago  (edited)

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"LADY"
Lady, you are! And in your beauty I have lost myself,
If it is not for your eyes to have an emerald color;
It's your charisma, your sweetness, it's your genuine being,
That tells me how great beauty to admire.

He has clear eyes,
And with a violet voice;
Green I want you green!,
As Lorca said well in his poem.

It is difficult to express in words so much beauty that abounds in it,
It's your pretty curves that get upset;
When your big smile dazzles,
Well that's when you show your best curve.

Oh! Lady, if you saw what I see,
Bella Dama, I know you know you light up;
And that anyone with you would be perplexed,
But you don't know the magnitude of your look.

And it's just your greeting!
Your Hello, how are you ?;
They make me sigh,
Even if your eyes have to hide it,
For fear that you will discover me,
And you can walk away,
I know that for you it's just friendship.

But who is not to be excited,
With such great beauty;
Hey! Lady, with emerald green eyes,
There are! Lady, with a beautiful violet voice;
There is simply NO WAY ...!

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Doesnt even sound like a poem when reading it ....little end rhymes ... Looks like a letter

Thanks for the comment, but that's why I say in the title that I try to make poetry.
I will take it into account anyway