Hunted Saint
I wouldn't have chosen to be there,
the timing to all a surprise.
When my love ran to me there waiting,
he had excitement in his eyes.
For weeks before I'd seen the saint,
there grazing in a fog of breath.
I wondered at its beauty,
my love anxioused for its death.
I don't know why I followed,
through the thick- rained with precious blood.
I felt its panic trailing,
my heart heaved with each thud.
I imagined its mighty rack,
falling like autumn leaves.
Eyes-wide, coat shinning...
as it must lower to its knees.
Never had I seen blood so red,
like light in brilliant stone.
We never saw the saint again,
and my love I no more atone.
By Kate Cloud
Inspire me winner!
Tomorrow evening I will be announcing the winner of my last inspire me contest. Along with the created art, and visuals of its progression. I apologize for the delay but art is art and sometimes the best things take time. I must admit however, that I've been extra busy these last 2 weeks with some other exciting projects, which I also can't wait to share! LOVE, all of you, and thank you for your on going support!
-Keep sharing, and keep Steeming!! xoxo -Kate
Just a little tip, each of your images is quite large in filesize, I checked the first one, it is ~3MB.
If each image in this post has a similar size, that is ~18MB for your readers to download, it could take a long time for your readers to download your post (I almost left your post before the images downloaded), and others might leave your post without ever seeing the images, thus, not upvote you, especially on mobile (I am not sure if #steemit serves smaller, compressed files for mobile, but I could check).
Perhaps you could try compressing them, where you would reduce the file size significantly, you really wouldn't lose much quality, if you reduce it to ~80% JPEG format, using e.g Photoshop's 'save for web' utility.
Hope it helps...
Oh and also, it was worth the wait this time. The grass, trees, and bird are my favourite parts of this piece.
Kind regards,
Optimistic
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Thank you! I will try this with my next post. Very kind of you to reach out, I'm definitely learning.
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My pleasure. A fan of yours since the One Night Stand
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Ha! Love it. xo
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;) hahaha
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Keep sharing, and keep Steeming
I like what you write from all of my heart
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What would you without your Robos >>) So steemit this ending, you do not know to keep something good.
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❤ Lovely beauty! :) ❤
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Beautiful choice. Thank you!
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Excellent artwork and poetry. It is inspiring.
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Your paintings are fabulous, wonderful!I love them.
I' m fond of art too, and here are my art works. they differ a bit from painting, but may be you'll like.
https://steemit.com/art/@victoriart/diy-a-cute-decoupage-interior-picture
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Great art @katecloud I can`t work with paints, only gel pen, admiringly look at your work!
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Just one talk,... amazing ur art with the poem👍 @katecloud
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