RE: The image is made of own imagination and thoughts (competition 17)

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The image is made of own imagination and thoughts (competition 17)

in art •  5 years ago  (edited)

I think your picture is beautiful, transformative. Makes me think of possibilities beyond the usual. I think you'll see that in my poem.


And the Music Played

Someone fed a quarter
Into an idle jukebox
The music played
A disco song

I pulled my ribbon
From fresh-washed hair
And watched its metallic stream
In disco light

Music and ribbon
United sight and sound
Cast a charm
Compelled us to dance

What was the magic
In the ribbon's sheen
That encircled the room
And mastered our feet?

We were all entranced
Whirling and spinning
Following commands
Until the music stopped

The spell undone
Ribbon now in hand
A simple ornament
With an instant of grace


And the Music Played: @xpilar Contest 17

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Hi @pokerm

thanks for great description / poem of my digital image