Zion:The newborn.
Dripping in blood and blinded
Feeling for first time to its skin
A breeze, both warm and chill
Shadows, its tears are omens.
Here at the ruins of Zion, lays
A newborn child
The world, that opens up ahead, those
Pecan trees, will witness it exist
Flat hills, sunflower beds
The Salted seas, will welcome it again.
Here at the stones of Zion, cries
A newborn child
In favor of the newborn child
The sun will smile, and so will I
In favor of the newborn life
The man will die, and so am I
Here at the stones of Zion, plays
A newborn child.
Previous poems:
The forests of our soul
Unbound
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Great work. I love the structure of this poem.
I shouldn't resteemit asap I am stupid. I thought you had this up for a while, I just woke up and show it.
I am sorry.
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HAHA I can imagine it. but never the less you are trying to help, for that thanks!!
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Very nice work! I like it and I have followed you! :)
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Thank you :D
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This painted a nice picture for me. Loved everything you chose. I also really just love the word Zion haha great poetry
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I had the hardest time with that part of my poem to be honest.
thanks for appreciating it!
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my pleasure!
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