Here's the next page in my graphic novel, just finished.
Elvis, who seemed to be her only path to salvation, has just rejected her advances.
Here are a couple steps in the process. The original idea was to have a full page with what I feel is an important story beat, and also a good visual. (I learned this from Herge's Tintin many years ago.)
Since this one had no text, I skipped the layout stage.
I changed my mind about the pose/angle.
And here's the final:
Thanks for watching!
Previous pages:
Here
First page:
Here
Links to some of my other art:
Good call on the pose revision, it really conveys the emotion better, especially since it has her focusing out of frame and lines up with the direction of the rainfall.
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Thank you! :)
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I find it amazing how a sketch can come to life like that. Thanks for sharing your process with us. It's been fun following this story
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Amazing work! I'll be sure to follow you and your journey.
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Amazing drawing... It almost looks like a photo. Wow! 😃
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I give it to you 🙌 those drawings are awesome!!! Keep it up!!! 😎👍
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Good person who always remembers his mentor! His name is mentioned in his creations!
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