Ren's Artprompt Writing Contest : Limitless

in artpromptwriting •  8 years ago  (edited)

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"I really appreciate the invitation, I kind of keep my distance from my kind, though." A voice echoes through the stairway. Two biotech humanoids are seated at the top of the stairs, leading to the rooftop of one of the tallest skyscrapers left in existence. One of them is from Earth1, the other is from Venus, year 3170. "Why?" Whispers the Earth1 humanoid. The Venus humanoid shrugs and lifts her head "So are you going to tell me your name?" The other laughs and grins before looking back at her to answer "Does it really matter?" They both giggle quietly, knowing they aren't suppose to be there. Skyscrapers are off limits to their kind.
"The name is Seph." He says looking at the door leading to the rooftop. "You ready to go, Crystal?" She looks at him, eyes squinted. "I guess. But you still haven't told me where we're going." He grabs her hand and replies "Does it really matter? We can't go back there..." He helps her to her feet. Foot soldiers can be heard conducting their search on the lower level of the building. They look at each other as if it's now or never "Let's go!"

They burst the door open and run to the podcraft and set their destination for Earth2 Year 2018. Seph places his memory chip into the craft and anxiously waits. Podcraft operating skills aquired. Download Complete.
Suddenly a feminine figure opens the rooftop door and gasps. It's too late. As the Podcraft floats towards the sky the two glance over at the woman who they once thought they could never live without. The mysterious lady whispers through a quivering voice "Good luck."

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Awesome, I too enjoyed the ride. I wanted more...this was sooo good. Everything you wrote I could see and feel, even the futuristic otherworld vibe. Thank You For Your Entry. @staceyjean.

I'm digging the interstellar journey and time travel. Happy New Year and thanks for the ride @staceyjean !

🎆Happy New Year!🎆

Thanks for enjoying the voyage with me ♥💯♥

great job sister

Thanks bro! 💯♥♥♥

no problem sister

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

I love the concept, you really leave everything to our minds to figure out but I don't really know what to make of it. For some reason, it reminds me of the book "Brave New World" I started reading :)
Anyway, I love it :P

Awesome! Glad you love it 😃🤗♥

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Nice ⭐️

Thank you 💛