Beautiful silken Saree,
As if holding the hem of the moon,
Laughing and making the world swoon,
Pretty black and glistening doe eyes,
Your sweet smiles,
You are the infinity of this abyss,
Of this life, of this perfect bliss,
You are on the edge of this world,
Stuck between seven heavens and hells,
Sailing on this ship, does it ring any bells,
The aftermath of what you create,
Lies beneath the stone and the dust,
Beneath the ashened bones and mist,
Look beyond the stars and you will find your soul,
Search in the outer space and you will create your own abode,
Under the moonlight as we all strode,
Holding the edge of the night,
A little too hard, a little too tight,
It’s you…It’s you…It’s you…
-©Pratibha Badgal AA
All the posts under the name Pratibha Badgal AA are my own.
I wrote this poem a few months back for someone. I hope you guys like it. You can comment down your opinions. Thank you for reading.
good poetry, i like it
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Thank you @zafar82:)
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Wao, this ia amazing.
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Thank you @oluwashinaayomi:)
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I loved how you started the poem; you showed the elegance of beauty of a Saree wonderfully.
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Thank you @poetrybyjeremy. Your words mean a lot:)
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not everyone can make poetry, but your poetry is good
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Thank you @aulia7629. Much love :)
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