This is my submission to Creative Writing- Part One - Write Something And Win Some SBD run by @aubreyfox
Claire
Leaning against the small bathroom vanity, she saw the reflection that puzzled her. That older face .The one with the sad doe eyes framed by crow’s feet. The once shiny and long chestnut hair, now hung limply around her drooping shoulders.
Claire sighed. She gathered her brush and fashioned the heavy limp mass into a bun on top of her head. She thought of adding a bow to make it look pretty, but she quickly changed her mind. Who would notice anyway?
Frank and the boys would be out doing chores and would be back soon expecting their usual big breakfast of eggs, sausage, bacon, pancakes, hash browns, coffee and juice. It never varied. It had been the same for the last 30 years.
She wandered down to the old farmhouse kitchen to commence her daily routine. Dogs needed to be fed, cats wanting attention and then out to the hen house for the eggs. The air was a bit nippy this morning and she didn’t take long to gather the fresh, warm eggs.
Claire was just putting the food on the table when Frank and the boys came bursting through the door like a herd of wild horses, hungry and dirty from the early morning chores. It would follow the same routine; reminders to wash hands, slowdown, and chew your food. You’d think they would be past the reminders now that they were grown men.
Frank slams his coffee mug down on the table and demands more coffee. Then complains about how badly she cooked the eggs today. The table look like a horde of locusts had descended upon it. The cacophony of noise as the boys left hurt her sensitive ears.
She began the horrendous task of clean up. First picking up and straightening the chairs that were left askew by the retreating rowdies. Then washing and drying of the mountainous pile of dirty dishes.
As she cleared and cleaned her mind wandered. What would her life be like if she hadn’t been so eager to leave home? She felt as if she had jumped from the frying pan into the fire. Had she really been so naive as to think she would be able to change Frank after they were married?
Clean up was finished and Claire could finally have her breakfast in peace. She put a pot of fresh coffee on and place a couple of slices of her home made bread in the toaster. She took out the butter that she churned yesterday out of the fridge and looked for the jar of her sister’s strawberry jam.
She hadn’t been sitting enjoying her breakfast for very long before she heard a faint tapping on the front screen door. She brushed off the crumbs as she got up to see who could possibly be there. No-one came calling during the day unless it was Sunday.
To be continued... (perhaps)
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Thanks, @goldenarms and @msp-canada!
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hey @cecicastor that was very intriguing and I am interested to find out what happens next , you did a fantastic job of creating a intro with hooks galore throughout the whole description of her daily routine , you gave just enough for the reader to be able to picture the scene perfectly in there head . Excellent intro , I wish you the best in the competition I hope you win . @steeeeeeeeeeeeeemmoonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Thank you.
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Greetings from Venezuela, excellent post, I invite you to visit my blog
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@cecicastor
I am glad you can write stories.
I have never tried.
Who knows? Maybe I could write a little interesting story.
Francis
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Give it a try. Who knows what master pieces may be lurking behind your pen...
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Lovely story. Waiting for the next....... Thank you for sharing.
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I love the story so far. You did a great job because I already don't like Frank. lol
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Working on the next part but have the flu today so not much getting done:{
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I hope you feel better soon!
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Thank you.
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Hi there @cecicastor :) You came up in conversation with @bashadow who referred to you as a real nice lady who seemed to like to read so I decided to drop in (haha, I have this tendency of viewing blogs on steemit as people's houses)
Lovely start, I had a very clear pictures of Claire as a woman perhaps a bit past middle age who is feeling dissatisfied with the routine of life :)
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Thank you for dropping by. And yes I am a voracious reader. I learned to read at my mom's knee when I was four and haven't looked back. lol More to come from Claire today...
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Ah, did you go to public school? If so then you know exactly what it feels like to be bored to tears as the rest of the kindergarten class is being taught their abc's. I had a royal witch as a teacher, who would make me sit in the corner facing the wall for talking, and the other child in the class who could also read quite a ways past Dick and Jane's level would end up facing the other wall. That is until my dad got wind of the situation. I don't know what he said to her, but I know after that Gary and I would be sent with books to a table in the back to read quietly while the rest of the class did A is for apple lol!
I'll keep an eye out for Claire :)
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Yes, I went to public school. Worse yet a parochial school. I spent a lot of time in the hall or sitting in a corner. I was bored to tears. Until they sent me to the library as a punishment. lol
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i so feel were your coming from...:(... text well done💗 great job & hope you tell us who's at the door on a NOT sunday :) 💗💗💗
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It's coming...
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as always<stalking YOU 💕💕💕💕💕💕
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It's up now...)D
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<calls in -TO drunk ^^^ bb TOMORROW^^
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Very nice story cecicastor!!
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Thank you.
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