Best Blog of the Day 4th Edtion

The writer's blog is about her experience when she attended her friend's wedding day. The blog was a reflection of an unconditional love of two individuals who were truly, madly, deeply in love with each other. It was a write-up of standing the faith, trust, love and a never-ending happiness.

FORMAT

The author's formatting style was not that good for me. As one of the readers of her blog, I have read it clearly because of using the h5 format she used in writing the blog but then she used it on the entirety of the article.

I had distinguished some grammatical errors within a phrase, some sentences and some of the paragraph. A piece of advice, if you aren't sure of your composition, do kindly looked for some "angel books" which would help you to formulate a better phrase and sentence in one whole paragraph. What do I mean by "angel books"? These are books or references that would help you to construct a sentence liked thesauraus and a dictionary. If you aren't sure of the word or prepositional phrase that you will be using in your sentence or paragraph, using these books would help you a lot.

Format rating : 84%

CONTENT

The blog had a wonderful and fantastic content. Maybe if you are a romance reader, you would love the message of the blog. But on the other hand, if not then hahaha! Back of you might throw your phones, tablet or laptop on a trash bin. Kidding aside! This blog's content was detailed. The way she arranged her experiences on the wedding was listed in chronological order and it was an awesome work. It was just all about the happenings during the wedding day of her friend.

I suggest maybe she could add on the last part of her blog her side of wondering what kind of wedding she dreams of? She could add more thoughts on how she will be preparing her wedding day? Who would be his dream man? Where would be her reception? By adding the following information, she was capturing the interest of her readers.

All in all her content is good but still needed some improvement to make it better.

Content rsting : 85%

PICTURES

Wow! Pictures and video at the same time in one blog! Great effort to the writer. A good thing you explored to use DLive as what the writer told us it was her first time to use and it quite showed a good outcome. There were some parts of the video that are shaky. Maybe on the way she was holding the camera. Try to use a monopod if you feel that you are not good at it. It would help you to deliver a high-quality video to your readers. The video that the writer uploaded is also the content of her whole blog.

For us, it was good because the writer showed us proof that those things/experiences she mentioned on her blog have evidenced that it really happened. It would also be better if the writer would add more pictures at the spaces of each paragraph of her blog so that the readers would enjoy it more. But all in all, the picture/video that the writer used was good. She was not afraid to explore new ways on how she will improve her blog and make it more interesting.

Picture/Video rating : 86%

Seeing two people exchanging their vows with each other was one of the most lovable scenes. It was a fairy tale that was never been told to us how it started but it was shown to us how they wanted it to be remembered by their family and friends. Stay in love fellow Steemians and always remember love is a universal feeling.