This is a very inspirational post! I'll keep it in mind for when I have kids. *vomits * Okay... maybe I won't think about that for now, as I still have to finish high school, but I have a suggestion for you. I highly recommend that you put some extra effort into punctuating your sentences better. Commas can be confusing to use, but here's a rule of thumb: any time in a sentence where you would pause, use a comma. There are certain situations in which this can have you using too many, but that is a better situation to be in than your reader not understanding what they are reading. Other than that, I really enjoyed this post :D