Waiting... For More Beautiful Ones

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A dream of fantasy and reality
Is she real or just a story
I've never seen him before, now I'm stuck with him
Don't know how she is, quietly she slowly hides in my heart
The more I see I am stunned
What can I say to him…

I do not know how much she will make in my memory, Just test me
She came in a dream and stole my sleep
Do not know how she is in the heartbeat
We are close but so far away, It's a strange situation

No one knows what will happen in the first sight !

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And now you are forever in my memory
But every time he sees it, he looks very beautiful
The beauty of it, my heart is very happy

In the full moon I hide from the moon
Don't you see the sunshine?
The sun rises today
You can feel it like day after night
For a while I just looked at not going to talk
Someone please stop me before my emotions overflow

THE END...

I HOPE YOU LIKE IT AND ENJOY IT

Best Regards :

THANK YOU

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      ·  6 years ago 

    I like how the gender is juxtaposed in the first stanza, then there is a stanza regarding she, then he, and finally I. Except, that's not accurate, is it? First person is prevalent the whole way through. I guess what I mean is that at the end it is focused on self, or rather, the speaker.

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        ·  6 years ago 

      You analyze each word well :D
      Thanks for visit at my post and comment :)

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          ·  6 years ago 

        interesting ......

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Tq

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