Hi @trueawakening,

I'm writing this comment because I read your post and I have liked it very much. I agree with you that more people should read about truth. I'm looking for the truth myself since I was young. I never satisfied with fairy tales and void explanations. I must say that your words are true, what you wrote is very interesting. And you also wrote very excessively.

Being excessive is good and bad at the same time. Primarily it gives you more room to express yourself and say what you want to say. When it comes to spiritual or psychological topic it's not easy to be short because these things are not easily communicable. But still, it is important to get the essence as much as possible so that the people of our rushing world only have to sacrifice the least amount of time to read it. Otherwise they will be scared away. I know it sounds bad but if you want more people on board, you need to address the masses and not only the tiny minority who is already on the path. The hard truth is that 90% of the people will never sit down and read a long blog post especially if it's something he can not even understand yet. Most of them just skip to the next cat video. Maybe I'm a little pessimistic here?

If you want to reach more people there is a few things I can suggest to you:

Don't use code box to emphasise!
It looks cool if you have something short to say but if you have a long paragraph or even a longer phrase it is not a good idea to put it in code box because it doesn't use line breaks and also the font family is hard to read. If you want to highlight some parts you can use bold or italic styling.

Try to break down your article into paragraphs and use titles for each important part. I know you doing that but I think you should do more. It will help the reader to digest one part at a time and to find where he/she left reading if she have to look at something else for a second. The hardest part for me was when I was reading, to follow the lines. I had to select the text I have read already, than keep selecting each line down what I've finished while I was progressing through the page. So my eyes had know where is the next line. (under the selected text) It was quite a challenge:)

If your blog is a sequence you might want to number them in the title. When I was browsing your blog history I've noticed that for the majority of your posts you use the same title with a little modification. No offence, but if there is a logic, I'm sorry but I couldn't figure it out.:)

Lastly, you want to use pictures. If it is not closely related to topic, that's fine (a forest, group of people, etc), but a good picture can drive in more people and if they are here already, they might read as well!:) Make sure however that the picture you using is legally OK to use. (no copyright) You can do that if you browse pictures on pixabay, for example.

These changes can be easily made with the use of MarkDown. If you need help with anything, I would be very happy to give you advice.

Hope you understand that I didn't wanted to insult you in any way with this comment. If the style you're writing is your way to express yourself or you don't want to waste your time to format your post, than forget what I've said. Maybe it is your spiritual autolysis and you just want to write it out... Either way I'm very glad that you started to write this blog. I will follow you from now on.

I made a demonstration of my ideas for you to see how much of a difference it's make if you follow these ideas. You can see it here.

The choice is always yours.

Regards, @neander-squirrel.

Have a nice day! :)