The concept of the article is interesting but the English language and structure is lacking too much to completely understand or enjoy it.
RE: When do women feel happy? by fj zameer
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When do women feel happy? by fj zameer
ok thank you next time i will try my best and try good words.............
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Sorry for being blunt, I do believe honest critique can serve to improve your posts. Understandably it is hard to improve much in a short period of time but putting more time into editing your posts might help to improve both your posts and your skill, learning while practising.
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