Thanks for the notes @jamielefay, and kind words! I can clean up the Hu'urei. Costume change isn't a biggie either. The lip looks fuller in this because she's suppose to be dragging it down with the lick [...that'll be coming after the inking]. Also, there's going to be a lot of blood around her mouth [...considering doing the stripes across the face. Do you think that'll be too much?].
I'll make changes during the inking process. Thanks again for the opportunity!
Fabulous, thank you. Blood around the mouth and stripes are good, we just need to make her face a bit younger. I'm excited about this!!! Thank youuuuu. J.
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I'm not sure if you are portraying Sky with pointy ears or not, it's hard to tell. She also looks like a human. She does very powerful genes and physical strength and natural beauty... and ... and... ;)
Her leg -> " as another Hu’urei jumped in her direction and pierced her thigh with his sword. She screamed in agony" Thanks. J.
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Oh my goodness, I'm so excited about this submission. Good luck
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