She woke up and
Most of her body
Was water
As the day waved
She was a sea
Discovering thought
Islands for this community
The share of her shores
Is soft on bare feet
Infinite broken glass
Made the sand complete
Even at night
When the biome hides
The essence outline
Is left behind
Even when
She closes her eyes
Her memories
Are left behind
Bravery
Dance before me
When they’ve pressed my shoulders
Into the soil beneath
Shine above me
When they’ve sharpened words
To pass through their teeth
Warm my insides
When they’ve summoned
The wintertide
Cover and clothe me
So my sprit is preserved
And my creativity is spared
From frost burn
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- https://unsplash.com/@thebrownspy
can I know the meaning of this wonderful poem?
because at the end of poem my thinks the goal at the death.
thanks @rubenalexander
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Imho, the goal of writing poetry is to be empty. So that no thing that has happened in the past distracts from the present or the future.
In these poems, I decided to choose the image first then let the poetry flow from what I saw. I have taken the opposite approach for all of my other peoms. The goal I have stated still was achieved: ideas and emotions (some I hadn’t realized were present) still rose to the surface and were released.
The first Island poem is weird one because I am describe the inner ecosystem of the girl and she is inside of herself according to the poetry and image. I don’t understand what went on there, but it is still interesting to note.
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I agree, the poetry of freeing the mind from the clutter, it's art!
and you do it!!
the art will be beautiful when emptying the mind, living as well as the deep feeling.
thanks @rubenalexander
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great poetry ♥♥ and beautiful pictures
I enjoyed reading thank you for sharing ♥
UPVOTE and REESTEMED
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A wonderful poem @rubenalexander I'm new to Steemit or like this kind of themes
following you ^^
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So beautiful.......
mind blowing....picture..
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really a beautifull poem and i really love this poem from all your best poems ...you are really a great man and your poety is always best @rubenalexander
well i think every one in this world want to discover or find a point where they can adjust thierselves and spend all life in relax as sea waves want to go beach sides and a person which dronwing in sea and look to beach
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A beautiful poem @rubenalexander, like the beauty of a beach photo you share, and has a thousand meanings behind that beauty. Poetry and beaches are not much different, because the beach has a beautiful view while poetry has a very beautiful story. I really like your work on poetry. Because you can always be a motivation for me, because I also want to be a poet like you. Thank you for sharing and hopefully you will be more successful to work
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wow....the photography is amazing .....and you create a great post....i like it...i hope everybody like your post....thanks for shear it...
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excellent poem... i hear your poem and its interesting... i want to see this type more poem from you... carry on....
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a very beautiful poem @rubenalexander
you are indeed excellent in creating poetry,
Thank you for sharing @rubenalexander
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This is some frosty poetry!
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wow!!!!!!!!amazing poetry..........love to read it...............
god bless you
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Never run out of creative ideas from you @rubenalaexander in creating poems ....
I like your poem!!
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WOW GREAT POETRY DEAR.NICE PRESENTATION..........
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both are so cute poem.......as your photography.......in that poem,,,,,you just disclose her every activity that you feel so deeply.........and always she stay in your heart,,,,,,,,,,,carry on.......best of luck..
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Very beautiful poem about the island
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The memories will stay there forever :) that's wonderful !!
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A very beautiful work, I always follow every article you post, because I really like the poem. Poetry can always provide new motivation and passion for me. I really like some poems. Thanks for sharing and I will wait for the new poem in your next article.
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Beautiful! Loved this! Thank you:)
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Beautiful buddy !The 1st one really touches the bottom of the heart in various ways !
The second one is sure inspiring !
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superb post i like it
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