implosiona con sutileza en mi boca,
activando sexualmente mis sentidos
con la clara perspectiva que desmigaja
los pensamientos más etéreos,
salvajes y excitantes.
humedece mis ansiosos labios
sin esperar insatisfacciones vacías,
sin expresar reacciones opuestas
ni prever imperfecciones disfrazadas.
desinhibe mi tímida elocuencia
tanto como para hacerme temblar,
tanto con para llevarme a la locura
o tanto como para perder la razón.
complace palmo a palmo mi sed,
mis hambientas ansias varoniles,
y hasta los vibrantes deseos
que me atan a ti.
Que poema tan sexy, María Almeida.
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Gracias por leerme, María Almeida. Un gusto tenerte por mi rincón poético. Un abrazo.
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Este poema parece la respuesta de mi ante penúltimo blog que se llama ninfomana autodestructiva.
Transmite mucho, me ha encantado...
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Tenías razón: tu "ninfomana autodestructiva" y mi "un sorbo" parecen tener ese vínculo piel a piel a punto se generar un clímax. Me ha encantado el tuyo.
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jajajajajaj te lo dije, conectan como dos piezas hechas de un mismo artista jajjaaja :)
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Hermoso post.
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Bienvenida a mi estereotipado mundo de parafraseo poético, @andreamsulba. Un abrazo.
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Explotas la sensualidad en palabras,seduciendo mentes y conquistando almas.
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Me encanta cuando intentan poner en evidencia mi punto subjetivo. Gracias por tan alagadoras palabras. Un abrazo.
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¡Wow! Me encanta la forma en la que haces poema <3
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Hasta yo mismo me sorprendo, @lutroconis. Gracias una vez más.
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Es un buen texto. Ojalá nos compartas poco a poco tus logros en la poética.
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Gracias mi estimado amigo, @jorgebit. Intentaré cumplir con esa esperanza. Saludos.
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"Vibrantes deseos que me atan a ti" de lujo
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Sensual y romántico. Puro placer leerte.
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