Quejidos

in cervantes-venezuela •  7 years ago  (edited)




En vano extiendo mis brazos 

buscándola en la cama por la noche;

cuando un inocente sueño me ha engañado.


Ay...

pobre cabeza la mía

que aún a tientas,

entre el vértigo del sueño;

sigue buscándola por toda la casa.

Cómo si jugara a esconderse de mí.


¡Infeliz!

¡¿Adónde vas con esa tumultuosa pasión sin fin?!


Autor: Luis Bello.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Me ha gustado. Breve pero conciso.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Ve, muchas gracias!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Tienes mucho talento, ¿Sabes como puedes potenciarlo más? intenta que cada post tenga una foto que vaya acorde al poema (así como este) e intenta publicar 1 vez al día (a veces siento que la mejor hora es tipo 6 pm) e interactuar en los perfiles de otras personas que también escriban poesía. ¡Un abrazo! seguiré leyéndote encantada.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Ve, de verdad agradezco tus consejos: los seguiré. Soy nuevo en la plataforma y no sé mucho al respecto. Soy constante, de hecho trato de publicar al menos dos veces al día.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            i like it!!

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Thank's!

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Saludos Luis, que talento!

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Muchísimas gracias por apreciarle!

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Me gustan tus poemas. La búsqueda que planteas aquí es hermosa y triste a la vez.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Me contenta que te gusten! Feliz día

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