El tiempo se nos escurre entre los dedos

in cervantes •  7 years ago  (edited)

En este post les comparto uno de mis primeros escritos✍.

Espero y les guste 🎔 🎔

Palabras ahogadas, palabras muertas

¿Por qué acalló sus palabras?
¿Por qué se ahogo con ellas?
Preguntaban las personas del pueblo,
la soledad iba y venía, hacia con ella lo qué quería
Nadie sabia lo que le sucedía, era una persona alegre y ocurrente.
Pero, esa persona se fue desvaneciendo en la niebla
Si tan solo hubiera exclamado un suspiro que alcanzara
a dar entender sus deseos, una mínima señal de disconformidad.
Pero no, en su calmada actitud no se quejó siquiera de falta de amor

¡Funesto silencio, del cual se hizo dueña!

Pero, ¿como podría alguien que no conoce a quien se va,
despedirse adecuadamente?
¡Oh tiempo que no nos permite disfrutar de lo excelente,
sino que se nos escurre entre los dedos!

¡Oh vida, que no me dejas anhelar una felicidad adecuada!
¿Será qué alguien logra entender mis silencios?
¿Qué alma puede desenterrar los secretos de los muertos?

Podran encontrar más de

mis escritos en mi Blog que tal vez,
los comparta pronto por acá.😏

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Muy bonito! gracias por tu aporte

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Gracias!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Hermoso... interesante... me gusta...

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Me alegra que te haya gustado <3

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Buen texto. El tiempo no dejará nunca de tentar la pluma de l@s poetas. Felicitaciones.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Muchísimas gracias ❤❤

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Me gustó mucho, buena redacción. Saludos!

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  ¡Genial! Me alegra saber que te gustó. Gracias ❤❤

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Excelentes expresiones, que buscan tan solo una cosa, tocar el alma del lector ^^, Saludos

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Agradecida 🙈 Misión cumplida, entonces 👏😉

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        bonito escrito, lleno de feeling y al cual se ve le pusiste inspiración!
                        un saludo y placer conocerte, pediente de tus próximas publicaciones :)

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          ¡Yaass! Me encanta leer este tipo de comentarios, muchas gracias por leerme❤. Un placer

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                              ·  7 years ago 

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              El tiempo es una variable muy importante y que muchas veces desperdiciamos en cosas sin sentido

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Tristemente es así

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Un poema mi intimo lo cual refleja el silencio de esa persona.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Totalmente :D

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