You're doing great bro, but lots things are still missing.

• You used just one tag. It is recommended to use at least 5 tags or 5 popular tags. Use tags related to your post

You should/ could also use the Nigerian tag so as to get good upvotes from Nigerian curators.

• No pictures :
  Adding pictures to your work makes it better to read. You should use pictures that are related to what you're writing and reference the pictures if they are not originally yours.

To succeed on steemit, you don't just make post, first check how others are writing,how they arrange their post and make it look presentable.

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