先分享一件正能量真实案例,就发生在我身边。
昨天晚上我在电影院门口停车时忘记关灯,好心的保安给我留的贴条如下图:
“老板,您车灯没有关,电话也联系不上,为了爱车安全,请已(以)后放上联系电话!下车检查电路门窗、生活愉快”。
从上边这张纸条内容我们看到,有个“已”字写成了别字,不难读出背后这个保安大哥可能文化程度不一定高,但简单的几句话中,既有(温馨)提醒,又有提示,最后还不忘带句祝福(生活愉快),可以看出这个保安是一个负责任、热心又不失对生活热爱的人,让人不由内心暖洋洋,很是感动,谢谢。
有同学时常私下问我,如何能写出优秀(精彩)的文章?我想谈下这方面个人的感受。很多人会误以为写作就必须得文笔优美,辞藻华丽,我认为不然。
一篇好的文章或文学著作,最终的目的都是希望能打动读者的心,无论是感动也好,激动也罢,都是如此。但怎样才能打动读者呢?我认为归根结底可以用一个词:真情。
所谓的真情,就是你在写作中无不贯穿自己真实的情感。我读过很多优秀作者的书,其中不乏文笔优美,也有文笔在我看来较为一般但通篇读下来却仍然惊叹伟大的著作,如路遥的《平凡的世界》,整部著作读下来,你会感觉非常朴实或者通俗,没有华丽的辞藻,但却深深地打动了多少人的内心,这其中自然也深深震撼了我,所以《平凡的世界》我读过几遍后仍然想有机会再读几次。
有优美的文笔自然是好事,但没有也未必就不能写出好的文章来。我认为写作除了真实情感之外,另外一个重要因素就是对生活的细致观察了。当你在写作的时候,尤其是中、长篇写作时,你需要积累足够的大量素材,如果你的人生阅历足够丰富,这对你来说可能不是件难事,但大多数包括一些知名作家其实都不一定有太多的阅历,所以你经常会看到一些优秀的作家为了写作的真实而去现场体验生活,除此之外,那就是需要你在生活中处处留心皆学问,哦不,皆素材(创作)了。
如果你具备了如上这两点,我相信你再次坐在书桌前开始写作时,顿时会感胸有成竹,写作也如如来神笔之一气呵成,否则即使你坐在那里憋上半天,也可能如挤牙膏般丁点文字,还是苦涩,读后如同食蜡般索然无味。
好看的皮囊千篇一律,有趣的灵魂万里挑一
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卸妆以后,好看的皮囊更是万里挑一了🙃
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哈哈哈 深受其害?
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🙃微笑面对生活……
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说的很有趣
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哈哈我就是文采不行,所以就需要感情饱满~还有一双善于发现美的眼睛!
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没错,写作好的文章不一定要妙笔生花,但一定要感情饱满,还有酒是那双善于发现美的眼睛
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就是说啊~
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我覺得像我這些沒文彩的人,用心寫是可以加一點點分。雖然不會提升到優秀文章,但至少應該(希望)讓人看得出是用心去寫
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对的
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你教写作一定是个很棒的老师,说得入情入理。
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老师过奖了 :)
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我也是文采不好,看到您的文章,收获很多!
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谢谢,希望对你有帮助
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平凡的世界,真的值得N次读。
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确实
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同意“真”,但未必所有的文章都需要感情,有的文章需要理性的分析,准确的逻辑,客观的事实。
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你说的很对
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能够打动读者是最主要的
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对的。
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生活里我经常会通过手机自带的note和recorder记录下素材:一般有时间能坐下来的就用note,一条条列下来或者关键字。遇到要长篇大论的就用recorder,可以边走边说。
如果遇到身边的小事,时间紧急的,还会拍照留存。
回到家赶紧把这些小脆片整理成文字。年纪大了,记性越发不好,就怕忘了记录当时的契机是什么
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非常好的习惯,已follow你
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谢谢您!!!that's my big honor!!哈哈哈
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我一直相信感情是最好的创作来源。😂
没有感情,没有自己,一篇文章,总感觉缺了灵魂。😂
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对的
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很受启发 细致观察 以情动人 就跟写文案一样 戳中用户痛点才能引发共鸣 : ) 那位保安留的字条好温馨 是不是看后很受感动呐
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是,让人心中一暖啊 已follow
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你写的东西读者特别受用,尤其对我味口。该上“月旦评”。
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谢谢老师。
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哈哈,总结的够精华,把我的小灯泡都点亮了
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哈哈
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写的不错
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谢谢 已follow你
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这个保安师傅真好,好负责。赞👍
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的确是呢
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有感而发和言之有物都是写作的好方式,用心观察生活也能有好作品。但是现在我们唯独缺少沉下心来写作的耐性。
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恩,
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实在是很可爱的一张纸条,顿时让人有好心情。
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是的,让人心情很好
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同意!!赞~
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:) 已follow
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谢谢(*°∀°)=3
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@rivalhw 从以上的文章,不难看出大伟哥是一名情感丰富的性情中人,读过的人都会有共鸣~
认同您的看法,没有情感的文章 - 犹如一具没有灵魂的躯体,空洞乏味
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没有情感的文章 - 犹如一具没有灵魂的躯体,空洞乏味
我也很认同你这句话
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Can't agree more...
喜欢读那些充满真实情感的文章~而且到最后不点个赞都觉得对不起自己良心..... 😂(
虽然我的赞不值钱,哈哈哈)Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
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哪怕是微不足道的赞,也是莫大的支持哦,给你也赞下
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我昨天因为下大雨,下车时忘了关engine,过了5小时回来才发现,不知道浪费了多少汽油或电池
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人难免会粗心,既然已经发生了下次注意就行,不必再懊恼了
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Your post is so interesting.
If you follow & upvote me , I will follow & upvote you forever.
@newsfeedworld
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这是我们作家的通知,
谢谢各位朋友的告诉。
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I really like the story about the parking lot people are kind, and I really like posting @rivalhw.
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我居然才看见这篇文章,真实的情感、对生活的细致观察,这才是好文章的关键呀!
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Nice post
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这保安好,棒棒哒
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情最好写、也最难写!
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很温馨的一个提醒,让人感觉社会还是有温情。再说,温情是不分身份的。
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平凡的岗位,不平凡的保安大哥。尽管是一张小纸条,却让人心里感觉暖暖的。
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有个“已”字写成了别字
我也常犯这个错误😳
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感谢这是一个有趣的职位,在等待其他职位。问候从印度尼西亚知道我 @rivalhw
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