最近快到了中秋節
想起以前在相聲裡聽到的一首定場詩
八月中秋白露
路上行人淒涼
小橋流水桂花香
日夜千思萬想
心中好不寧靜
清晨早念文章
十載寒窗在書房
方顯才高志廣
這首定場詩,我上網查了一下,比較無法判斷真正的作者是誰,各種說法都有,詩裡頭的字也各有不同。
之所以會一直記得是因為每一句的最後一字的一部分會是下一句的第一個字,小時候聽相聲時聽完覺得十分有意思,便一直記在心上,20年過去了都還是記得。
第一句的"白"記得是與薄同音,最後一字"露"取其"路"為第二句句首。
第二句最後一字"涼"取其"小"為第三句句首。
第三句最後一字"香"取其"日"為第四句句首。
第四句最後一字"想"取其"心"為第五句句首。
第五句最後一字"靜"取其"青",添上三點水為"清"為第六句句首。這邊也有別的版本為青春好念文章 或 清早覽遍文章,前者覺得是為求完美的版本,但語句我自己覺得不夠文雅,後者的覽遍也較無雅興,有種為了功名或著有野心的感覺。而原版本前面已經有了清晨,又再加上一個早念,我覺得代表好學,期盼早些再念上一些詩文想解除心中的疑惑,因此我覺得比較好點。
第六句最後一字"章"取其"十"為第七句句首。
第七句最後一字"房"取其"方"為第八句句首。
第八句最後一字"廣"取其"八"為第一句句首。當初第一次聽到這邊覺得前面的文句已經夠精彩了,沒想到最後一句還能繞回第一句,實在心理覺得有種歡喜的感覺,文句竟然如此的厲害,而且文句也很通順而且有意境。
謝謝你的閱讀
若是有聽過這首詩有別的見解,或著有錯的地方再煩請在下方指正!
因為我也沒有查太多相關的資料,純粹分享而已
也許大家中秋節聚會、烤肉 可以跟家人朋友分享一下這首詩!
討論討論看有甚麼心得
果然是哦,这样作诗也挺好玩的
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糟糕 我完全沒概念 XD
不過還是要祝你中秋快樂
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