路 & 小安小安 - 一天 的小诗（两首）｜月旦评

in cn •  7 years ago  (edited)

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《路》
一条走了十年的路。
你会忘记那颗树的绿吗？
我会。
因为我往这条路的每一寸空气里寻去，
才发现路上没有光，
没有光就没有暖，
没有暖就只有冷。
我看见一个人，
在冷里拿出了刀，
歇斯底里的刺向那棵树，
大吼着，狂笑着，
接着来了一百个人和一万个人，
我看得清他们的每一个毛孔，但是
却看不清他们的脸，
只有那一道道刀光和怒吼里的笑声，
仿佛正义的狮子。
于是我理了理我的衣领，收起了我的刀。
面无表情的离开了。
就好像我
从来没见过那棵树。

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《小安小安》
小安小安
天气越来越冷
朋友圈里，你又点了那家外卖的单
楼下新开了一家奶茶店
可我知道你又要加班

小安小安
好久不见，你过得怎样
你家的胖猫阿蠢还好吗？
还记得那条路上阳光的味道吗？
我手上还拿着你给我的小盒子

小安小安
如果你知道，我多想看到你
没有冬天的雪和春天的风
也没有吵闹的街角和安静的歌
就只是想远远的看到你

小安小安
我就像你家的阿蠢
薛定谔的猫
在盒子里同时存在
生和死的两个状态

《路》这首诗是因为最近目睹了几次网络暴力而创作的，只希望大家走好自己的路，别让别人弄乱了你的路，这首小诗也会是我下一篇短篇的引子。

而《小安小安》是我曾经一个游戏里选的女性角色用的名字，因为我的英文名是A开头，就用了安来代替，觉得略有意义，就拿来用了一下，没有别的含义和代指，可是这仍然是一首情诗，送给12月却怀着春心的少男少女。XD

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      ·  7 years ago 

    恭喜本文入选《“月旦评”第四期(十二月期)推荐入选文章 第1轮》！

    https://steemit.com/cn/@rivalhw/3p7atg-1

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      ·  7 years ago 

    受宠若惊，十分感谢！XD

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        ·  7 years ago 

      很赞，这么快就入选月旦评!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      谢谢大佬，哈哈(￣︶￣)↗

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          ·  7 years ago 

        好听！

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          ·  7 years ago 

        谢谢你XD

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            ·  7 years ago 

          真棒(／≧ω＼)

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              ·  7 years ago 

            谢谢Thanks♪(･ω･)ﾉ

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                ·  7 years ago 

              生活中有很多诗的元素

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                是的，在生活里寻找诗意

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  薛定谔的猫

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    薛定谔的猫共存的两种状态不正像爱情里的似生似死吗？

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      生活就是一首诗，写得好！这只猫实在是太萌了，猫还是胖了可爱✌✌😂

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                        谢谢，哈哈，那肯定是橘猫最可爱啊XD

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            《路》-平淡中表现出冷静地疯狂，
                            《小安小安》-日常的场景中有生活的乐趣。

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                              谢谢点评♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪谢谢欣赏☺️☺️☺️

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