很高兴能够参加@TVB发起的三个一活动https://steemit.com/cn-contest/@tvb/cn-31-23?from=groupmessage
作为新手,应该积极参与一下组织活动。看到三个一活动,想到自己一首处女座打油诗,挺符合条件的,就是差一张原创照片。于是,拍了一张“自悟”的照片,别吓着大家就行~
自悟
自命不凡性不羁,
奈何宿命与我敌。
逆流前行终有悔,
天地悠悠一傻逼。
韵译:
踌躇满志自我陶醉,性情豪放无拘束。
万般皆命由不得人,无能为力仰天叹。
逆水行舟知难而进,历尽波折悔当初。
追古忆今天地之间,独一无二大傻逼。
赏析:
这首诗描述了作者的成长历程,从原来青葱懵懂,认为人定胜天的莽撞汉子,成长为一个真正的社会人的过程。全诗立论新颖,发人深省,温柔敦厚而不失讥讽之意,可谓是不可多得的佳作。
“自命不凡性不羁,
奈何宿命与我敌。”
诗人表达的是一直以来自我感觉尚可,通过努力拼搏即能有所收获,庆幸自己的智力与运气,追求魏晋之风,不滞于物,不拘于礼,放荡不羁自认为潇洒倜傥。可是人生不如意十之八九,很多时候都是生而不得志只能承受却无能为力。
但是,诗人在此处并没有怨天尤人,他把自己同宿命放在一起做对立碰撞,说明他并没有被命运打败,或者说,他还不甘于被命运打败,就算最终"无可奈何花落去",也要"零落成泥碾作尘",留暗香于世间。
“逆流前行终有悔”
曾经觉得身处这个浮躁的社会理应有所坚持,为了人性的解放和所谓生命的意义不惜反裘负薪,自以为是。但其实这个社会一点都不浮躁,相反,它很冷静,甚至冷酷,它并不会因为你的理想执念而网开一面,天地不仁以万物为刍狗。
想要在人群之中逆向行走,终究是行不通的。你将面朝来时的方向,被迎面而来行色匆匆的众人推推撞撞的倒退着步子,和他们向同一个方向移动。你终将一点一点变成你厌恶的那种人。所有世俗的规则是用来遵守而非打破的,你所跳出并且曾经蔑视的那些条条框框,终将套你入瓮。可惜直到今天才有所顿悟,悔之晚矣!
最后一句的“天地悠悠”采用了欲言又止,犹抱琵琶半遮面的修辞方法,没有一定底蕴的读者无法准确理解其深远的意境。出处是唐代诗人陈子昂的《登幽州台歌》:
前不见古人,
后不见来者。
念天地之悠悠,
独怆然而涕下。
这个隐喻深刻地表现了诗人面对现实孤寂无助的情绪。语言苍劲奔放,富有感染力,尤其最后"一傻逼"的描述,是本诗的点睛之笔,树立了诗人无比伟岸的立于天地之间,虽悲愤而不感伤颓废的千古大傻逼形象。
人间受伤,不外乎情感与金钱,二者相通,但你不能该谈钱的时候提感情,该讲感情时又说钱。"谈感情伤钱"的做法,比"谈钱伤感情"要高明几十亿倍。说到底,人要见过世面。六神花露水曾经讲过,人分为两种,一种是面对天大的事,都能淡定得像屁大的事;另一种是明明屁大的事,他都能折腾得像天大的事。
世上无难事,
只要肯撒币。
傻逼轮流做,
今年是自己。
这里应配一首音乐,beyond的《海阔天空》:坚持理想,暗夜赏雪,看不到方向,表达了作者的寒心与无奈。为了理想,风雨飘摇日夜兼程,迎着冷眼与嘲笑,可会为了身边的事物而改变初衷?
……………
实在扯不下去了,希望大家开心,能够会心一笑,此文足矣。
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@julian2013, 佩服!佩服!
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哈哈,我是挺满意这个处女作的,当初是受了很大的打击
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佩服佩服
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好文采。不过不是自命不凡,就是不凡!
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多谢肯定,向你学习
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@julian2013, 嘻嘻,小可可来给你点赞啦~~~
BTW, @cn-naughty.boy 淘气包,来,给MM来一点[还我漂漂拳]嘛,嘻嘻...
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还能这样打情骂俏,很是开眼界啊
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唉哟!人才啊,眼镜兄!
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惭愧惭愧
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给你个赞,老哥!
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哈哈,多谢支持,希望看了有所收获
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大哥好文采,收下膝盖
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开心就好!
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啊哈哈,请多指教
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哪敢指教,共同探讨~~
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赏析到位……
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写完以后,感觉成熟了不少,向曾经的懵懂青年挥手告别
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老哥,写的真的很好!
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谢谢老妹夸赞,我会尽力让大家开心~~
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老铁写的真好,我也参加这个活动了,哈哈https://steemit.com/cn/@xiaoyaosilang/or-the-most-in-the-forest
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哈哈,谢谢赞赏。我刚拜读过你写的,很期待英文诗歌呢~
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油菜花!
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被逼的~
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实际上,无论喝酒,唱k,狂吸烟,还是写文章,都不足以表达强烈的情感。
当初真是有感而发,头一天写了这首诗,第二天觉得不过瘾,就“赏析”了一下,希望大家能有所收获,至少能笑笑
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