我不是一个天真的孩子--时代的歌之239

in cn •  7 years ago 

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看一看！我用画笔染过的天空，
有我喜欢的颜色。
风蹦蹦跳跳地经过，
蝉声如雨的柳林。
用瓶子收藏的星星，
夜晚很明亮。

很安静！沙土里静静地钻出一只甲虫，
它在追猎一只小小的飞蛾。
底下还有很多蝉蛹，
夏天不是已经到了吗？

蜘蛛在枝丫间，
灵巧地编织着日子。
一格一格的，消逝在
冒失的苍蝇访客身上。

我不是一个天真的孩子，
想私自收藏这片刻的乐趣。

@lemooljiang #songofera

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      ·  7 years ago 

    被我看到了少女情怀。

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      ·  7 years ago 

    哈，这都被你发现了？！

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      ·  7 years ago 

    写的很有画面感！

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        ·  7 years ago 

      多谢支持！

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          ·  7 years ago 

        I am new in steemit, please give support so that i can exist in steemit.
        Warm greetings from Gayo.
        @edibersah, Follow and Vote

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            ·  7 years ago 

          有一颗童真的心才会有如此纯纯的诗情画意啊😊！

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              ·  7 years ago 

            哈，多谢夸奖哦！

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                ·  7 years ago 

              赤子丹心的童真，收藏这片乐趣的我们，依然是孩子。😂

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                  ·  7 years ago (edited)

                天哪你的诗竟然如此轻松，让我怀疑是在一个多月以前写的。。。。

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  你是太紧张了，盯得太紧！放松点，能有多大事？！

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  人事物總有正反兩面~~

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                      ·  7 years ago (edited)

                    你不是一个天真的孩子，你是一个调皮捣蛋的孩子，蜘蛛网就是你破坏掉的，哈哈。

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      我不捣蛋的，哈哈

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        希望我能像这只蜘蛛，灵巧地编织着日子。:-) 把生活活出诗一样的日子！

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          这句也接得很有诗意呢

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          感觉这一首是顾城《我是一个任性的孩子》的阳光版，赞~

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            哈，顾城也是我喜爱的作者！

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