林深时见鹿,海蓝时见鲸,何时才能见你

in cn •  6 years ago 

有人说:
林深时见鹿,海蓝时见鲸,梦醒时见你。

可实际:
林深时雾起,海蓝时浪涌,梦醒时夜续。
不见鹿,不见鲸,也不见你。

但终究:
鹿踏雾而来,鲸随浪而涌。
你没回头又怎知我不在。

可我看来:
鹿见人而惊 消失于林深,
鲸踏浪而上 搁浅于浅滩,
亦如我见你 如碌如惊。

终究:
鹿惧人前,潮退鲸落,雾气藏你心。
不见你,不见我。
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