穿越诗歌8 写在2017.10.1——送给同胞的诗

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五律 中华儿女

千年风雨倾，百万大疆平。
圣典红旗舞，神洲万众惊。
改革兴百业，开放引繁荣。
华夏英才辈，东方腾巨龙。

注：中华新韵



【小译】


经过了几千年的风雨飘摇，中华大地终于迎来了太平盛世。
开国大典上，五星红旗迎风飘扬，好像喜悦的舞蹈。
神州大地，众人惊喜欢呼。
开革开放，复兴了各行各业，带来一片繁荣。
中华儿女，人才辈出。看，那东方正腾飞着巨龙！


就不翻译成英语了，估计老外也没有兴趣哈哈哈

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      ·  7 years ago 

    高产的才女！

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        ·  7 years ago 

      高产如母猪。

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          ·  7 years ago 

        ？？我做错了什么吗？

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            ·  7 years ago 

          没有啦，因为有朋友说别人高产如母猪。我觉得只有最好的朋友才能用这种词呀。所以我喜欢别人这么说我哈哈哈，有点贱贱的是不是哈哈哈哈

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              ·  7 years ago 

            我只是不太开这样的玩笑罢了，朋友间更觉得不太尊重人的！再说了山东人都特实在。不好开这样的玩笑啊！山东人有点守旧！哈哈！

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                ·  7 years ago 

              三哥是你比较传统吧，现在年轻人熟悉了玩笑的尺度开得都很大哈哈哈哈

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                哦哦！看来真的是我守旧。不过感谢能有你这个朋友！哈哈！有你真好！😊😊😊

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  有三哥真好！

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    我是在值班，你还不休息，又在构思新作了看来！😊

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      我准备睡了呢，白天再构思一样的，争取规律的睡眠，晚安哈三哥。

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        好诗！

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          在你的教育之下，我觉得我应该写一个哈哈。

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            好有气势！

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              国庆嘛，肯定是要有气势的。

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                感觉一片红色。

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  那是呀，就是今天就是属于红色的日子，不然哪有这个假期呀哈哈哈

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    好湿好湿，这是交作业的吗？

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      不是作业，我自己写的。作业限词林正韵，那个韵写不气势来，那个韵适合写中秋我觉得。

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        近期刚上映一部纪录片《辉煌中国》，这首诗很适合该片的主题

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          这真是高抬我了，承受不起呀。
                                          我诗真心一般。

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            TVB姐好才华！

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              我不行，我这凑的不怎么好，一般写拟古诗按新韵写容易被鄙视哈哈

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                是五律还是七律?内容我不敢评。

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  写错啦，哈哈马上改

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    巨龙腾空起 天地风云变

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      律诗和绝句是不能押仄韵的，你有兴趣可以上网看一下。
                                                      不过你这个接的气势更大，很恢弘！

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        我看看谢谢建议哈。

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          厉害了我的姐

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            我不行事呢，我就瞎凑的。

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              好！+1

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                谢谢妹子，要经常来串门哟
                                                                话说，你们四川有没有——串门，这个词？

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  有的有的 会的会的 🙃

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                    我还以为只有我们这边才有这个词，原来这个通用的哈哈哈

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      多才多产，真心佩服。

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        我这水平一般，谢谢贺老师的鼓励！

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          有气势，不错！我也打算写篇文章，本来选好题了，结果昨天看到有篇文章用了相同的题目，就决定换个题目重新写了

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                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                            重复也没事吧，写文章这种事，本来就是各有特色，不分伯仲的。

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