原创诗歌：春 | 月旦评

in cn •  7 years ago 

在我窗台的角落

疏忽了你的存在

你却如此的茁壮娇嫩

春天刚刚迈出的脚步

你就孕育了久长的含苞待放

那个被我落寂的日子

是怎样向上的过程啊

迟迟未开的美丽

等我吗？等我这个粗心大意的人儿

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站在阳光里，你知道是怎样的时光流逝

如那含苞的生命期待温暖的照耀

盛开了就有了枯萎的开始

生命就是如此的从生到死

你依然顽强的盛开！盛开……

你勤勉的连夜晚也在吸收

我懒惰的白天也在做梦

抓住哪怕一丝的光阴尽可能的有效利用

这个春天的第一天我发现了你

发现了春天全部的秘密

春天其实一直就在身边

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@xiaoshancun 感谢您的阅读与支持！您的鼓励就是我最大的幸福！

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      ·  7 years ago 

    继续加油

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        ·  7 years ago 

      谢谢亲的支持啊！

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          ·  7 years ago 

        杠杠的！

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            ·  7 years ago 

          谢谢夸赞啦😄！

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              ·  7 years ago 

            詩配上圖，很有感覺啊

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                ·  7 years ago 

              随手拍了一张图片，有了一点点灵感，却写不出心里想的啊😊！

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                好有感觉😊 好喜欢(｢･ω･)｢嘿

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  感谢您的欣赏啊😊！谢谢亲！

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    写的很有感觉
                    喜欢这句

                    发现了春天全部的秘密
                    春天其实一直就在身边

                    但是这句“久长”有点不太顺口呢

                    你就孕育了久长的含苞待放

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      哈哈！室内温度达不到所以老是不开花！

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        @xiaoshancun 大哥这“春”诗完整的描述了春的意境～

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          谢谢你的欣赏！努力学习中啊😊！

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            花儿美，诗更美

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              谢谢啦！酷爱你的文字呢！每篇都是美文！

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                好个春意盎然，比起我们这里来说真的是别样的美。

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  哦！我也是突然发现我阳台的一盆花色啊😊！

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