我第一次写了中文的一首诗

in cn •  7 years ago 

大家好!我是俄罗斯人,我学了中文并偏爱中国的文化!最近我看了很多中文诗,它们都是不太复杂的,不过很好听和强劲的!

之后我决定了写我自己的一首诗。亲爱的,请看一下,留下你们的反馈!如果你们喜欢的话我就很高兴。


我在房子里

看着树叶落下

看着雪落下

落下我房子的顶

人们被雪覆盖

道路被雨点覆盖

只我

被保护

只我

感觉安全

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  ·  7 years ago 

哈哈!写的还蛮有诗意的!点赞!

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