To the drone of cicadas on a scorching summer day, she draped herself in orange so she could hide among the day lilies. When the sun bent down to kiss the horizon, she ran to get a kiss, too. Mother Moon watched over her as she slept. In the morning, she awoke in a field among the ripening pumpkins. She drank some dew, then flew up into the trees to dance with the leaves. They loved her orange so much that they began to dress themselves in earthy colors, too, for the oncoming Harvest Moon Ball. They turned and pirouetted, dipped and curtsied, serenaded by crickets, caressed by the wind, until the night melded into eternity.
~text and self-portrait photo © by me~
This is another entry in the ColorChallenge series which @kalemandra began. It's been such fun participating in it each day since I've been here!
———————————
See my other ColorChallenge posts
For a fabulous sisterhood supporting women on Steemit, check out:
For a great group of people who are serious about blogging, check out:
Beautiful colors @thekittygirl, STEEM ON!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much! I appreciate that! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
2 things stick out, first is the harvest moon! (which passed not too long ago!)
second is cicadas!!!! How lucky/unfortunate to hear the drone of cicadas, don't these things come around once every 20 or so years?
Otherwise, I like the shortness of the writing. I had to read it twice, perhaps you can space it out so we can read at the same tempo you intended it to be read. I think it would help readers like me (who see a block of words and forget to take a breathe between sentences!).
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a wonderful and detailed comment! 😊
There are actually several species of cicadas; the ones we have here come out every year. But, yes, there are other species that appear only one year out of many. I can't imagine a summer day without the sound of the ones we have!
I appreciate your suggestion on the spacing of the writing, and perhaps this would be better as a poem rather than prose. I will seriously consider that for other short works! Thank you!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
You're writing is awesome! More more more!!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much! You make me feel proud! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Very vivid descriptions in this write. Maybe it is the color and the photo used, but the words reminded me of the imagery from a beautiful cinematic film called "Hero." The use of colors in that film with movement really set the mood for each scene.
Well done!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much! I have never seen the film "Hero," but will be on the lookout for it! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
What a beautiful story! Loved it :)
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank yo so much! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
I keep think of surprisingly sweet Cabernet Sauvignon for some reason.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you for that lovely and poetic comment! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Oooh. I can only imagine how wonderful the whole dress looks. I love the two colors playing together, the orange and pink. The bottom of the dress already intrigues me as it seems like my kind of piece. Love the writing, a very nice touch
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
That's actually an orange skirt that I got at a thrift store! I love the cheery, orange color (which is slightly muted, the way I processed the photo). It's one of my favorite skirts! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
That was very good writing!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you so much! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Thank you for the resteem! 😊
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
Congratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by thekittygirl from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem, theprophet0, someguy123, neoxian, followbtcnews/crimsonclad, and netuoso. The goal is to help Steemit grow by supporting Minnows and creating a social network. Please find us in the Peace, Abundance, and Liberty Network (PALnet) Discord Channel. It's a completely public and open space to all members of the Steemit community who voluntarily choose to be there.
If you would like to delegate to the Minnow Support Project you can do so by clicking on the following links: 50SP, 100SP, 250SP, 500SP, 1000SP, 5000SP. Be sure to leave at least 50SP undelegated on your account.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
I really got swept away while reading this. Love the descriptiveness of this post.
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit