Comedy Open Mic Espanol Ronda #16 Perdóname Señor

in comedyopenmicespanol •  6 years ago  (edited)

No he visto a muchos cantando por acá pero me voy a atrever jajaja hola a todos, esta canción la compuse hace un tiempo y fue con la que participe en "Steemit Open Mic semana #70", y bien, esta canción me alegra cada vez que la escucho, es una letra divertida con un ritmo animado, creo que no te caerás de la silla de tanto reír pero si te sacará una sonrisa :D

"Perdoname Señor"

Esta es la letra en ingles:

Forgive me, sir
I ask you please
I am a sinner
every day I'm worse;
I do not pay badly with good
I've hurt too
And I like to drink
I also listen to trap
I am everything but a good model does not

I was in town, the party was boring, I was taking the last one for the flight, when I suddenly saw the exit and there was a pretty angry and ill-dressed girl;
I drunk at last I asked him why do you look so bad? She did not want to answer, I asked her name and she smiled this time showing the middle finger turned around and I got upset;
//// I did not see it anymore (I did not see it anymore) ////

Between alcohol and rock pop hip hop soul, country in spanish trap and regueton, useless trying not to see a pant that moved great at the same pace and sound
It was her, the same woman that I found that day, the one who said with her fingers rudeness I remembered and seriously gave me a lot of anger, and I went to look for her I went to scold that girl
But I had a boyfriend, she had a boyfriend, and that corduroy saw me, the next thing that happened was that he ran after me and
//// I did not see it anymore (I did not see it anymore) //// (bis)

Forgive me, sir
I ask you please
I am a sinner
every day I'm worse;
I do not pay badly with good
I've hurt too
And I like to drink
I also listen to trap
I am everything but a good model does not


Nomino a: @dali13 y @fernando20

Gracias por darte una vuelta por acá es un honor!

¡Hasta la proxima!

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Muy buen ritmo! :)

Gracias!! :O

Cuando Maduro escucho tu tema dijo:

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Bienvenido a la familia del COM. Un abrazo desde Aragua.

jajaja que bonito canta

Bienvenido @elisonr13 estamos muy alegres con tu música en #comedyopenmicespanol, esperamos seguir contando con tu participación en las rondas, recuerda que puedes hacer 2 entradas por semana.
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Gran entrada @elisonr13, Esperamos verte en la segunta entrada jajaj Suerte!

gracias lilo!!

Muy buena alabanza para Dios. Bienvenido a COME @elisonr13.

gracias mi hermano, saludos.

excelente amigo

gracias amiga indi !

jajajajaa esta fino

Sergio! Gracias men :)

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Perfecto, gracias!!

Jasjajajaja q buena canción por Dios, me hiciste reír mucho esta genial!

Jajaja A veces se puede ser más carismatico que de costumbre estimada @betamusic