This weeks 4 words rhyming competition has ended, the winner and runner up will be announced tomorrow Check out the fab rhyms.

in competition •  7 years ago  (edited)

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THE 4 WORD COMPETITION IS NOW OVER

THE JUDGE (MY DAUGHTER) IS READING THE POEMS

Here are the entries:

@sumsum
There is a trick
to build a house,
you use a brick
and get applause
wait, a brick is not enough you need like two or more
and put a flower in front of your door!
Then trow a party for your friends,
you have a house, you NEED to dance!

@len.george
The Waltz of the flowers
as they danced around the floor
it would be a neat trick
if I could rhyme them with brick

@mstedda
It is a trick
To dance on a brick!
And even a flower
Will give you applause!

@trevor.george
To build a house of stone and brick
Lay them down neat, that’s the trick
The dance of trowel in experienced hand
Makes houses flower throughout the land

@josediccus
I know a magician with a bag of TRICK.
he can walk the ropes and do a hat trick.
Ontop of a glowing or growing flame he can do a dance.
He is mister cobblepot
He is an amazing juggernaut.
He can change the colours of a purple pot.
See his prowess he can even swallow a brick.
and vomit a beautiful flower.

@smylie2005
I once learned this trick,
It involves using a brick.
Set it up nicely behind a flower
With its strong stance, it lends a lot of power.
Do a little dance
Jump, skip and prance.
Pray to the Gods, to make that flower grows,
And then pray that daddy doesnt hit it when he mows!

@andysantics48
A poem in my style written especially for Karen :D

Karen loves her steemit she posts at every chance
Everyday she takes some pictures but she'd dearly love to dance

She shares about her health and the veges she will grow
The odd picture of a flower but more recently of snow

The days are getting longer the bricks outside exposed
Karen's dreaming of the garden and getting busy with the hose

She posts about her dogs and how they have a trick
Of stealing her spot in bed instead of chasing a stick

@faves
There's a TRICK to joyously build a house with BRICKS surrounded by FLOWERS...
you need music and most importantly DANCE.

@solomonsel
Perfect horror called life
With the d`evil we dance
Dazed,confused and left in a trance
Afraid to show my soul, he'll devour
Weathering away like the last flower.

I need to outsmart but I can't play a trick
Rather be violent and bust it open with a brick.
That's too gruesome, the thought makes me sick
But this life has made my blood thick.
I'm too deep enveloped, with it I must stick.

@cecicastor
There is a trick
To use the wall of brick.
First pick fresh red flowers
Then do the fandango dance.

Have you your yellow pants?
Then you shall have the powers
To throw the brick
Beyond the door trick.

@thatmemeguy
So you dance like a brick
such a boring trick
Might as well give up
given that your dance sucks

Please stop you're only making it harder
this is not a place for a beginner
The reward ain't a couple of flowers
this is not your hour

So please go back to the training room
Maybe that way
the stage won't be your tomb

@kiwideb
There was a young lady from France
And oh how she loved to dance
Her cleverest trick
Was to dance on a brick
And waving a flower, she’d prance.

The Judge is going through these now, I will post winner and runner up tomorrow.

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Thank you son-of-satire

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congratulations for the acceptance of your contest dear friend @ karenb54, extensive to all who have participated
I wish you a happy rest

Thank you dear friend :)

That all seemed to go quite well huh?

You got way more replies than my competition posts.

All that remains now is for the judge to crown me the winner..... ;-) hehe

I have passed it onto my daughter so any problems please get in touch with her. I will have a go at your comp just need a shove as i keep forgetting :)

All the poems are really good. I feel sorry for the judge. It will be a difficult choice.

Leaving that to me daughter haha the poems are brill, hoping to do it again on Monday :)

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