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Pasó de refilón, y en medio de la bulla provocó silencio, mi mundo despedazándose; si se llevaba su vida, también la mía.
Así fue cuando nos ultrajó la muerte, sonrisa amiga a veces irónica. Amenazaba a mi amado, no visitaba; usurpaba.
Tendría que pasar por encima de mí.
Para participar:
https://steemit.com/spanish/@joseph1956/convocatoria-al-1er-concurso-de-cuentoproto
Gracias a: @joseph1956
excelente ........ me gusto mucho, aqui te dejo el link de mio https://steemit.com/concursosexpresiones/@jlmprint/1er-concurso-de-cuentoproto
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dale gracias por leer :), ya me paso por allá
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Fuerte Amor.!, Suerte en el concurso.
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gracias :)
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suerte!, me gusto
te invito a ver el mio
https://steemit.com/concursosexpresiones/@carlosebb/1er-concurso-de-cuentoproto-eterno-amor
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gracias :)
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Me gustó, me alegra estés participando, éxitos, saludos.
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gracias amiga
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Exitos, @ricodarly cada vez que leo hay uno mas bueno que el otro
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gracias nena :)
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Buen aporte! Mucha suerte
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gracias ;)
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gracias :) abrazo
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Excelente amiga
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gracias :)
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muy lindo la verdad
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:) graciasssss
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Altamente poetico... ¡Suerte en el concurso!
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sii, gracias por leer :)
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Hola esta hermoso @lindaaguila
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gracias linda
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Excelente participación tienes mi voto mucho éxito!! acá mi participación espero tu apoyo! https://steemit.com/concursosexpresiones/@noteswill/1er-concurso-de-cuentoproto
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gracias :)
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Buen trabajo, quedo chévere el regusto a tragedia. Que complejo es contar una historia con pocas palabras, me gusto mucho este concurso por eso y veo que muchísimas de las obras son maravillosas, así como lo es la tuya.
P.D: Ultrajó, si es el pasado del verbo ultrajar, es una palabra aguda que termina en vocal.
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gracias por apreciarlo, también por la corrección :)
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https://steemit.com/concursosexpresiones/@jlmprint/1er-concurso-de-cuentoproto
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