Walking up a hill and back down
Broad sky.
Flowing out and through—
My pond brain.
Mercenary of crystal,
Hesitant sleep in the bosom.
Ozonated dream on the eaves.
Warrior of bliss.
.
Full imperceptible,
I discover myself—
In cloudless static,
In the biting cold.
Frenzy of elaboration,
Frost that bathes my pineal.
A graze, a radiant knife:
Dark tangerine skyslice.
.
Step after step.
Slope upon slope.
Ache under ache,
I unembroil myself.
I unencumber something.
I unelongate the symbols.
.
It snows not, it shines not;
Everything is a vain transparency.
And yet, I feel in the loft insensible
The stirring unmistakable,
Of what I do not know.
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Written by
@d-pend
11/13/17
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You are discovering yourself in the dazzling light, the hill is a riot that pulls you down. The power of the mind reassesses the stars - your strength comes through the freedom of the word - Master of the New Poetry @d-pend
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I love that phrase
the hill is a riotand as always I'm so appreciative of your kindness, creativity and support!!!Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
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You are always welcome my friend @d-pend
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Brought back memories of a trek up to the 5,416m Thorong La Pass in the Annapurna Range, Nepal in 2014. Thank you!
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That sounds amazing. How was the experience @acdevan? I'm glad it was reminiscent :D
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It was exhilarating. I joined the support crew of the high altitude mountain bike race Yak Ru Enduro
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Ah good day my good friend @d-pend,
Step after step.
Slope upon slope.
Ache under ache,
I unembroil myself.
I unencumber something.
I unelongate the symbols
Your frequent use of , the letter s. Is an alliteration makes your poem rhythmic and sweet.
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Good day @josediccus! I appreciate your feedback, wholeness!
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I could feel that I was climbing with you and enjoy the trip as well. Excellent writing :-))) up
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Oh, that's great, I'm glad you felt it was vividly depicted :-D Thank you @margaretwise!
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You are so welcome my friend ;)
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Love this, composition is great, photos compliment the writing. Resteemed
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Thank you very much for the support, kind words and resteem!
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Anytime, can't let good content like this slip by =)
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Enjoyed the read, especially liked the inverted photo, perfect.
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Thanks very much for reading and weighing in @beginningtoend :)
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Good written friend
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Thank you @pardeepkumar :)
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Nice writing!
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Thanks a lot! :-D
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A very beautiful picture was a good choice my friend
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